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Bathroom diary cont.
Your hands on my body as steam fills the air.
Place my hands on the wall as you..
Take
It
All
Free me from the rising pain of reality
Help me escape the grip of life
You're
My
Release
Touching me the way only you can.
Sliding inside, becoming part of me.
Place my hands on the wall as you..
Take
It
All
Free me from the rising pain of reality
Help me escape the grip of life
You're
My
Release
Touching me the way only you can.
Sliding inside, becoming part of me.
Published 27th Nov 2019
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27th Nov 2019 10:02am
The wishes for that male company articulated in part 1 (posted last year) are fulfilled steamily. Marvin Gaye's Sexual Healing (which pic made me think of) would make apt background music to a reading aloud.
28th Nov 2019 8:31pm
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20th Oct 2023 7:56pm
I found this piece very pleasing. It's very well written, and nicely composed.
