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What I lost....
I lose something everyday
except the pain,
The endless pain that I got
when we two parted.
I lost my name and place
where you meant to live,
my heart,
The broken heart that aggrieved.
I lost the consensus that
people used to grant me,
And the courage
that gave me relief.
I lost my hopes in dark,
the only hopes
That illuminated my soul
towards your path.
I lost those secrets
The only memories of past,
and my mind cut its wings
that I can't seize them again.
I lost those tears
that did not dry my eyes,
And now my eyes burn
In silent tears of grieve.
I lost the blood in my veins,
And my heart refused to fill
your coral thoughts,
How would it work?-
I lost the breath and
slain by a fair cruel man,
Who may be greeted
on my part of death.
I lost myself in puzzle
of thousand white shrouds,
My soul claims to dive in
the grave, that you couldn't find.
except the pain,
The endless pain that I got
when we two parted.
I lost my name and place
where you meant to live,
my heart,
The broken heart that aggrieved.
I lost the consensus that
people used to grant me,
And the courage
that gave me relief.
I lost my hopes in dark,
the only hopes
That illuminated my soul
towards your path.
I lost those secrets
The only memories of past,
and my mind cut its wings
that I can't seize them again.
I lost those tears
that did not dry my eyes,
And now my eyes burn
In silent tears of grieve.
I lost the blood in my veins,
And my heart refused to fill
your coral thoughts,
How would it work?-
I lost the breath and
slain by a fair cruel man,
Who may be greeted
on my part of death.
I lost myself in puzzle
of thousand white shrouds,
My soul claims to dive in
the grave, that you couldn't find.
Published 18th Nov 2019
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2019 3:06pm
Beautifully written. I like the solemn tone and can really feel the heartbreak and loneliness in your words.
19th Nov 2019 6:04pm
16th Dec 2019 2:30am
Your ability in this voice and thought flow is apparent...write on, poetess
Welcome to DUP
Jeff
Welcome to DUP
Jeff
16th Dec 2019 2:45am
7th Feb 2021 4:18pm
Dear J,
Firstly, I’m embarrassed I haven’t seen your work before now. You have an old world style of writing that is warm and romantic even on subjects such as this write of heartbreak and loss. You’ve captured artfully the ache and void of a breakup and its pain and misery. I look forward to reading more of your current and future works. H🌷
Firstly, I’m embarrassed I haven’t seen your work before now. You have an old world style of writing that is warm and romantic even on subjects such as this write of heartbreak and loss. You’ve captured artfully the ache and void of a breakup and its pain and misery. I look forward to reading more of your current and future works. H🌷
7th Feb 2021 4:56pm
Thank you very much for reading and the complement. That means a lot to me. Much love.💕
