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Heavenly Serenity
standing on the edge of life
yet feeling not alive
death calls me beyond
sacred place where
light always shines
luv is just a smile away
surroundings so peaceful
where bodies are changed
and pain is forever not felt
sacredness flows thru my heart
as an angelic choir sings harmoniously
while I’m dreaming of serenity......
living among heavenly Angel’s
while my imagination awakens
“when the night falls”
Copyright © 2019 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
yet feeling not alive
death calls me beyond
sacred place where
light always shines
luv is just a smile away
surroundings so peaceful
where bodies are changed
and pain is forever not felt
sacredness flows thru my heart
as an angelic choir sings harmoniously
while I’m dreaming of serenity......
living among heavenly Angel’s
while my imagination awakens
“when the night falls”
Copyright © 2019 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 17th Nov 2019
Author's Note
Inspired by Again, thank you for the inspiration 🌸
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17th Nov 2019 5:09am
18th Nov 2019 2:57am
Hey EW.......what a sweet response......you’ve made me smile......in not going anywhere my friend.......thank you for such a compliment.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
17th Nov 2019 6:44am
18th Nov 2019 3:04am
Hey Serenity......I’m so happy you enjoyed this one.......it truly felt beautiful to write.......thank you......honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
17th Nov 2019 1:47pm
It's a comforting notion - being free of biological aches and pains.
Nicely penned, Flower.
Nicely penned, Flower.
18th Nov 2019 3:10am
Hey JB......one day I will know physically how it feels......in reality......I’m looking for no emotional pain the most.......thank you for your visit......always honored from a talent such as you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
18th Nov 2019 11:19am
At least when it comes to emotional, it's temporary. And you can always talk yourself out of it by reminding yourself of more pleasant things and truths. But I hear ya loud and clear. And thank you. You're too kind.
Thank you so much to share your words so reality with me.......I’ve gotten much better letting things go that I can’t change.......I feel more peaceful with less stress. You really are a great talent! Appreciate you 🌸
17th Nov 2019 3:09pm
18th Nov 2019 3:16am
Awe Hunter.......humbly thanking you for smiling upon my ink.......honored by the ovation.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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18th Nov 2019 3:25am
Hey Didi.......thrilled to have a new fan......thank you for sharing enthusiasm.......looking forward to reading your inks......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Nov 2019 2:42am
I feel the same way about sleep, Purpled One! <3
There is something very ethereal and tranquil about his poem. Thank you for sharing. xo
There is something very ethereal and tranquil about his poem. Thank you for sharing. xo
18th Nov 2019 3:30am
Hey Ahavati........thank you for sharing your feelings with me.......you always bring a smile and encouragement.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Nov 2019 3:54am
18th Nov 2019 3:53am
i like the first and last lines
that's all what is purple
again ain't spiritual
purply sis
that's all what is purple
again ain't spiritual
purply sis
19th Nov 2019 2:51am
Poetic Bro.......thank you for the blessing of inspiration and being honest......your response has moved my pen once again......my full comment to you will be in my next ink I post......purple luv & hugs xo :)
21st Nov 2019 3:33am
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18th Nov 2019 7:53am
What a beautiful write, Flower Girl! So tender and soothing. I can absolutely relate to it!
19th Nov 2019 2:56am
Hey Sappho.......so pleased you can relate to this.......dreams awakens the imagination in the silence of night fall......thank you for your wonderful words.....honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Nov 2019 3:02am
Hey Tim.....yes I’ve seen and felt them many times......I’m glad this piece awakened your imagination.......blessed to have you visit......thank you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Nov 2019 3:08am
Awe Lily......you make me so laugh and smile.......thrilled to have your comment and smile back upon my ink.......thank you for luv.......you f’n rock too 😈 always honored by your visit and RL......purple luv & hugs xo 🤗💜
Well, all I can say is, apart from a beautifully soothing poem; sounds like you certainly see heaven a lot clearer, as you say,
“When the night falls.” Usually helps if you're out in the sticks (countryside), like, haha. ;-)
Don't hurry there though because it will wait as long as you need it to wait. Live your heaven on Earth first.
But I can see heaven a lot clearer now after reading your write, flowergirl. :-)
“When the night falls.” Usually helps if you're out in the sticks (countryside), like, haha. ;-)
Don't hurry there though because it will wait as long as you need it to wait. Live your heaven on Earth first.
But I can see heaven a lot clearer now after reading your write, flowergirl. :-)
19th Nov 2019 3:17am
Hey Billy.......truly blessed by your response to this......luv the different view you’ve imagined.......now days I see life differently in every way.....including death and the beauty of heaven that will come with it.......I’m stress free most days and my soul is more at peace facing reality as it is......thank you for your thought provoking words......purple luv & hugs xo :)
