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Unapproachable
I wish for some understanding
I wish for more love
can't figure out what I'm doing wrong
is it all in my head,
or has the world forgot about me?
don't want to hurt
feel like I'm being weak
I smile and laugh
but its always temporary
writing poetry because it's all I got
we're all on this Earth
you would think we would be in this together
then why do I feel like everyone pulls away?
wanting to stay secluded
can't even say hello without getting weird looks
I try to ask questions and get ignored
don't mean to be pathetic
I work hard and show respect
you would think that would get respect back
I don't mean to be and asshole
I really hate being this hateful
but in a world with so many people
I couldn't feel more alone
wish someone would try like I do
talk to me and say "how you doing?"
still trying to understand what I'm doing wrong
don't mean to be unapproachable
I'm just too afraid of one day not trying
I wish for more love
can't figure out what I'm doing wrong
is it all in my head,
or has the world forgot about me?
don't want to hurt
feel like I'm being weak
I smile and laugh
but its always temporary
writing poetry because it's all I got
we're all on this Earth
you would think we would be in this together
then why do I feel like everyone pulls away?
wanting to stay secluded
can't even say hello without getting weird looks
I try to ask questions and get ignored
don't mean to be pathetic
I work hard and show respect
you would think that would get respect back
I don't mean to be and asshole
I really hate being this hateful
but in a world with so many people
I couldn't feel more alone
wish someone would try like I do
talk to me and say "how you doing?"
still trying to understand what I'm doing wrong
don't mean to be unapproachable
I'm just too afraid of one day not trying
Published 11th Nov 2019
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11th Nov 2019 5:34pm
Powerful piece!!
Very much resonated with me
"writing poetry because it's all I got.
we're all on this Earth
you would think we would be in this together
then why do I feel like everyone pulls away?
wanting to stay secluded "
Yes u would think that but sadly so many of us don't see it that way
it's always " me me me" or "us and them" wish we would grow out of this shit as a species but at this point we're going backwards it seems,
I'm guilty of this, secluding myself ,not speaking to a soul or trying to connect with anyone but I recognize the Importance of Interacting with other beings especially my own species
Excuse my lil rant lol
Great piece! Worked me up! Haha
Very much resonated with me
"writing poetry because it's all I got.
we're all on this Earth
you would think we would be in this together
then why do I feel like everyone pulls away?
wanting to stay secluded "
Yes u would think that but sadly so many of us don't see it that way
it's always " me me me" or "us and them" wish we would grow out of this shit as a species but at this point we're going backwards it seems,
I'm guilty of this, secluding myself ,not speaking to a soul or trying to connect with anyone but I recognize the Importance of Interacting with other beings especially my own species
Excuse my lil rant lol
Great piece! Worked me up! Haha
11th Nov 2019 7:32pm
11th Nov 2019 7:44pm
dearest LK you're a beautiful person
you've been so supportive of me
and I've been so selfish forgive me...
keep writing my friend...
love Brenda ❤
you've been so supportive of me
and I've been so selfish forgive me...
keep writing my friend...
love Brenda ❤
6th Dec 2019 9:39am
Aaw, you're not unapproachable..I do remember a time I would
even.come to you when I under psuedonym Spiltsunsets_XVII..
and guess I should let you know how much it means to me,
definitely time to let you know how you were one of the few who
carried me when I was too hurt and weak to even walk on my own..
I guess you should know as well how you helped me gain strength
to eat little by little, more and more each day...
I could go on, but I'll cry, if do
So, thank my sweetheart ..
❤
even.come to you when I under psuedonym Spiltsunsets_XVII..
and guess I should let you know how much it means to me,
definitely time to let you know how you were one of the few who
carried me when I was too hurt and weak to even walk on my own..
I guess you should know as well how you helped me gain strength
to eat little by little, more and more each day...
I could go on, but I'll cry, if do
So, thank my sweetheart ..
❤
6th Dec 2019 6:28pm
That is an incredible thing to say. Guess I never really think about if I add any value to people's lives. It puts a smile to my face to hear that. 😁
I do feel like I wish I could do more, if that makes sense? Some days I shut off and distance people. Just know if I do that with you that I don't mean to. You're always welcome at my door.
I do feel like I wish I could do more, if that makes sense? Some days I shut off and distance people. Just know if I do that with you that I don't mean to. You're always welcome at my door.
10th Dec 2019 7:10am
22nd Dec 2019 8:35am
Really heartfelt, man! The world hasn't forgot about you... We're just getting to know you! Thanks for sharing your poetry with us! 😊
28th Jul 2024 11:04am
