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I Want To Grow
Thirsty and hungry
Looking for where
The next meal
Comes from
To fill this heart
Malnourished
With nothing to feed on
Praying for rain
To water the ground
Of my heart
My seed to grow
Bread be made
To fill this hungry
Heart of mine
I want to grow it cry's out
I want to grow it daily yearns
I want to grow is its song
I want to grow an unending quest
Published 6th Nov 2019
Author's Note
The heart daily yearns for this
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6th Nov 2019 8:28pm
I love this spill and the Q's
but it still leaves me wondering WHAT exactly it is that You are searching for.....thirsting for........hungering for
(i struggle with metaphor and simile and many forms of poetry and so it might just be me here not understanding. Also, i am a schizophrenic and so that might play a part in my understanding.)
but it still leaves me wondering WHAT exactly it is that You are searching for.....thirsting for........hungering for
(i struggle with metaphor and simile and many forms of poetry and so it might just be me here not understanding. Also, i am a schizophrenic and so that might play a part in my understanding.)
6th Nov 2019 8:51pm
Thank you earth_empath,
Every heart wants to be filled, a hunger exist therein, and a thirst abide. The WHAT differs from one individual to another.
It is not you not understanding, it was a question for everyone to look within.
Grateful
Every heart wants to be filled, a hunger exist therein, and a thirst abide. The WHAT differs from one individual to another.
It is not you not understanding, it was a question for everyone to look within.
Grateful
6th Nov 2019 9:05pm
then how does Your ink apply
if the heart has given up?
How does Your spill apply to YOU'
and how might we make a connection?
if the heart has given up?
How does Your spill apply to YOU'
and how might we make a connection?
6th Nov 2019 11:23pm
7th Nov 2019 7:57pm
LOVE IS A YEARNING FEELING THAT WE ALL WANT AND NEED BUT SOMETIMES IT COMES WITH A BIGGER PRICE TO PAY, FOR IF THE LOVE YOU SEEK AND THE LOVE YOU HAVE DOESNT FEED YOU IN WAYS OF GROWTH NOR ADD GROWTH TO YOU MENTALLY EMOTIONALLY NOR PHYSCIALLY EVEN SPIRITUALLY THAN THAT ISNT LOVE OF THE HEART MIND NOR THE SOUL FOR I AGREE LOOK WITHIN FOR KNOW YOUR SELF VALUE AND YOUR SELF WORTH NICELY PENNED
8th Nov 2019 3:19pm
Thank you Stoney223 for interpreting it better from this salient point,.
"FOR IF THE LOVE YOU SEEK AND THE LOVE YOU HAVE DOESNT FEED YOU IN WAYS OF GROWTH NOR ADD GROWTH TO YOU MENTALLY EMOTIONALLY NOR PHYSCIALLY EVEN SPIRITUALLY THAN THAT ISNT LOVE OF THE HEART MIND NOR THE SOUL" It encapsulates it all.
Thank you so much.
Graceful
"FOR IF THE LOVE YOU SEEK AND THE LOVE YOU HAVE DOESNT FEED YOU IN WAYS OF GROWTH NOR ADD GROWTH TO YOU MENTALLY EMOTIONALLY NOR PHYSCIALLY EVEN SPIRITUALLY THAN THAT ISNT LOVE OF THE HEART MIND NOR THE SOUL" It encapsulates it all.
Thank you so much.
Graceful
8th Nov 2019 5:47pm
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