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Created pain
You are the wound I won't let heal and the ache I need to feel.
You’re like the bruise I alway press and the cut I will not dress.
You are everything that is wrong. I've had this feeling for so long.
You torture me and I don't want to be free...
You’re like the bruise I alway press and the cut I will not dress.
You are everything that is wrong. I've had this feeling for so long.
You torture me and I don't want to be free...
Published 2nd Nov 2019
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2nd Nov 2019 4:38pm
Wow - very creative (and intriguing) way to describe a crush
i'm sure many a being experiencing the crush has gone through what You've spilled
Loved Your choice to use the word < alway >
i'm sure many a being experiencing the crush has gone through what You've spilled
Loved Your choice to use the word < alway >
2nd Nov 2019 9:36pm
2nd Nov 2019 6:21pm
2nd Nov 2019 9:37pm
2nd Nov 2019 9:08pm
Generally I eschew formulaic rhyme, but it has decent fluidity. Nice work. 💖
3rd Nov 2019 1:24am
