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Sound of Autumn
The rustling of leaves
Crunching like ice beneath her
Feet is beautiful
Crunching like ice beneath her
Feet is beautiful
Published 25th Oct 2019
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Entry for Cafe Critique 1(Haiku) competition.
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12th Nov 2019 10:10pm
My favorite part about this is the ice like crunch of the leaves, and how it hearkens back to the wintertime, as if to acknowledge that death is kind of the essence of the fall as well, and it can be lovely too.
