Quieter than the knife

You are a bold writer who roams themes that others shy from. Excellent exploration of the mind of this femme fatale.

John

I liked the idea of destroying myself to create a fitter persona

LOVING THIS PIECES...MOST WILL NEVER DARE WRITE PIECES ON THIS MATTER OF DARKNESS AND DEPTH BUT YOU DID IT WELL WITH JUSTICE WITH MURDER AS ITS TOPPING AS THE FAVOR FOR A UNWANTED GUEST...RESPECT

I know you dare more than I

YES I WILL FOR NOTHING IS UNTOUCHABLE TO ME FOR IF ITS APART OF THE DAILY LIFE, I WILL SURELY OPEN UP SOME EYES TO THINK FROM THE MIND AND FEEL WITH THERE SOUL....

A sharp write...
Silent and very well written...

Beautifully written

One day I would like to be breath taking not just quiet

Exquisitely twisted tale with exceptional verses to thrust the narrative.  

telling stories is fun

And to do it in a unique voice, even better.