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Alone with Jack The Ripper
the devil is in the details
a writer is in their words
lately, I think the best writers are sociopaths
narcissistic egotistical bastards
my soul has opened to so many
just to be burned and manipulated
this is the virtual world
Jack the ripper would cream all over himself--
with so many victims of his lunacy just fingertips away
sometimes I look at all of your faces and think I'm not alone
then I look again and it's just me and Jack
playing the same game all these centuries later
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Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
18th Oct 2019 6:16pm
I AM LOVING THIS PIECE SO RICH IN DETAILS AND SUBCONSCIOUS MATTERS OF EVIL MIX WITH THE DARK...NICELY DONE
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Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 00:54am
thank you graciously dearest Stoney I love your vision of this write...I deeply appreciate the love on these thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 12:40pm
YOU ARE ALWAYS WELCOME DEAR SOUL LIKE I SAID I TRULY ENJOY READING YOUR WORK IT EXPANDS THE MIND TO THINK OUTSIDE OF THE BOX OF THE NORM...RESPECT WITH LOVE
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Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
18th Oct 2019 6:49pm
Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 00:55am
thank you dearest poet for a most intriguing comment on this write... a perspective I had only momentarily considered when writing this... you are deeply appreciated...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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19th Oct 2019 00:56am
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Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 00:57am
thank you graciously dearest poet you gifted me a smile with your comment I'm happy my writing appeals to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
18th Oct 2019 6:47pm
Oh Brenda you are not alone. So much cruelty and for what?! Does it change anything for the bully? Anyone that takes pleasure of someone else's misery is fucking pathetic. They will remain unhappy because their misery comes from within. Thank you for this write sweet one. I very much needed it. I have been on the fence about leaving the Deep all together. But then who wins? No, I'm staying. There are too many here, like yourself that enrich my life.
-Minxy❣
-Minxy❣
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Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 1:01am
thank you beautiful Minxy One for the love here this was written in a moment of depression and slight paranoia... I may go down for a moment but I always come back I won't be detoured either...I draw inspiration here and deep camaraderie... I'm happy you too have decided to stay despite the sometimes ugly environment...
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
love & hugs...
Brenda 🌹
Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
18th Oct 2019 7:07pm
a sad truth that often brings me to tears of violent crying for hours
I know for a fact there are not many sentient beings like me who
started life abused and battered and went through life and often continued the patterns learned.
& had people i would have died for
die on me
& for some really weird reason,
the f*cked up people who You have mentioned in this spill
rarely if not NEVER die.
Gives me more reasons not to take my own life during my psychotic episodes.
Thank You, Beautiful Sister for posting this spill
i'm certain it will aid in healing and not just for me........
I know for a fact there are not many sentient beings like me who
started life abused and battered and went through life and often continued the patterns learned.
& had people i would have died for
die on me
& for some really weird reason,
the f*cked up people who You have mentioned in this spill
rarely if not NEVER die.
Gives me more reasons not to take my own life during my psychotic episodes.
Thank You, Beautiful Sister for posting this spill
i'm certain it will aid in healing and not just for me........
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Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 1:04am
aw hugs you tightly dearest Tallen I've read of your tortured childhood and it brings me much pain...I was in a weakened state of mind when I wrote this I will not be leaving either...I too had a hard childhood I'm grateful for the pain I've endured in life though it has flavored my soul with empathy...I deeply appreciate you dear poet...
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
love & hugs...
Brenda 💕
Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
18th Oct 2019 9:02pm
Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 1:05am
you're so right dearest poet he accepts me how I am and I'm pretty fucked up...I cherish you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
18th Oct 2019 10:41pm
The virtual world just fingertips away like you creatively say and express can beguile many. En garde friend. Your poem is wooh ...sublime!!
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts about and under my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts about and under my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
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Re: Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 1:17am
thank you beautiful poetess for sharing your thoughts on this write... I will check out your poetry I understand what you mean...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. Alone with Jack The Ripper
19th Oct 2019 4:44am