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"Crack wise" / "Better wise up soon" - Debate: 33year old VS 11year old. c.1963.
" Jeez, how many I gotta tell you?
You stupid or something?"
"Gee, Dad i dunno. Maybe i am (stupid)"
"Goddamn it. Don't you crack wise with me, kiddo.
You know i've got the strap to make you regret it"
"I dunno! I dunno ! I dunno.....that's all I get out of you'
maybe I should just take you and your brother (6 yrs old) down
Commack Rd. to the nuthouse (Pilgrim State Hosp.) , and
leave your asses there. Then maybe you'll know something.
Stupid!
All I can say is you better wise-up soon."
"Yesa, Dad.. I promise. Ubetcha."
~~ Sssssssssmack!~~
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Published 13th Oct 2019
Author's Note
Off along the night light's glimmer....... anonymoose ,2019
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13th Oct 2019 00:46am
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8th Dec 2019 00:39am
Dear Poet Perfect-----
Thank you & fuck you,
You're so much better than anyone here, I recommend you move to a higher level literary website, where your razor sharp insight would be better appreciated.
Your attitude and critique are rather imbecilic.
Thank you & fuck you,
You're so much better than anyone here, I recommend you move to a higher level literary website, where your razor sharp insight would be better appreciated.
Your attitude and critique are rather imbecilic.
