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top of the mountain
.
i have
waited
a long
time
for nothing...
it's been
the
greatest
achievement
of
my life
Published 12th Oct 2019
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12th Oct 2019 3:50pm
12th Oct 2019 3:57pm
Nothing has been the easiest task i have ever accompanied lol.
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buddhakitty.
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12th Oct 2019 4:13pm
Wow! Thank you so much sunsettown. Appreciate the high compliment.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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12th Oct 2019 9:13pm
True acceptance (which I find really difficult) catapults one to a new level of experience. Nice work.
12th Oct 2019 9:30pm
12th Oct 2019 11:47pm
i like how this can be read different ways, but using the title to lead me, this reads as uplifting: that it was a waste of time to wait so long... at the top of the mountain, you can see it all and everything else that came before it was the journey.
13th Oct 2019 00:05am
Anonymous
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13th Oct 2019 1:06am
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13th Oct 2019 1:44am
I am a simple creature when it comes down to it lol. Thank you BB.
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buddhakitty.
luv's
buddhakitty.
16th Oct 2019 10:30am
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17th Oct 2019 6:56pm
There is something n everything of Nothingness..that reveals in the the selflessness n perseverance ..to be in the motion in the continuum .. reaching the summit of it all.. beautiful brevity n poetic elegance in the simplicity you handle ...write on ur wise n beautiful mind ev,thanks bk xx
17th Oct 2019 11:35pm
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