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Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
a shot for the blonde
she just giggles and looks away
on the rocks for peek-a-boo girl
underneath those black curls,
she’s still figuring out what her clit is for
be gentlemen they say
they're just barflies...
I just don't care anymore
I'll take home the next set of tits that walks in
a redhead and a wink later and I'm flying high
reserved look seals the deal
reeling her heart-shaped ass into my lap
odds are she's a screamer for all those shy looks
but even on my worst day
I'll make sure her orgasms are real
because making her shake and howl
is the only way to ward off my demons
baby blues look surprised
pouty lips bite back a moan
never fucked like this before
tight ache takes the beating
angelic masochist
taking demonic Eucharist
speaking in tongues
delivering last rites of passage
inside her, I die a little
only to be reborn in her truths
open to the sin of me
she's deadly
and I’m feeling suicidal
Author's Note
thank you dearest HF for creating with me it's always a pleasure ❤
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Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 11:21am
Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 6:44pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney from us both you're deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
10th Oct 2019 11:27am
likewise for it is very rare when you can connect with someone on a mature mental level of love and respect its a very beautiful thing to share...
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Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 12:31pm
Well well.. What big teeth you have! What a howl. Sexy work.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 6:44pm
giggles thank you beautiful Kitty from us both...you gifted me smiles today...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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9th Oct 2019 12:36pm
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 6:46pm
thank you dearest HF for creating with me it was a real pleasure... I myself really like the picture too but can't help but wondering if it's a bit much for some...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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9th Oct 2019 2:47pm
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 6:47pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest poet he makes it easy... I cherish your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 3:35pm
Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 6:48pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest Tender One I love it when you visit my pages...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 4:38pm
and I'm feeling suicidal...the need to release can be our communion or just move us closer to death...great pairing...I'll have what he's having lol
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 6:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim from us both I had written that last stanza but HF with his great poetry eyes thought it was unfinished and provided that suicidal line... I deeply appreciate your thoughts here...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 8:18pm
might be time for dirty red to make a come back...nicely done here! <3
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 8:26pm
thank you graciously beautiful one from us both this was a lot of fun to write... love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 9:04pm
The most stunning girl to ever wear a red hood! Picture so fits the poem even down to the colour of the hair. Favourite lines:
be gentlemen they say
they're just barflies...
I just don't care anymore
I'll take home the next set of tits that walks in
a redhead and a wink later and I'm flying high
reserved look seals the deal
be gentlemen they say
they're just barflies...
I just don't care anymore
I'll take home the next set of tits that walks in
a redhead and a wink later and I'm flying high
reserved look seals the deal
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
9th Oct 2019 9:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Solomon from us both for the love and appreciation on this write...I'm happy the picture appealed to you as well...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
10th Oct 2019 2:02am
Hot damn you two! The imagery really put me in the moment. I daresay I even felt this one, lol! We need more! Encore! Encore!
-Minx❣
-Minx❣
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
10th Oct 2019 2:05am
giggles thank you beautiful Minxy One from us both you made my night brighter tonight... I'll see what I can do he is a pleasure to write with...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
10th Oct 2019 4:10am
Now that's some fantastically freaky shit
Definitely makes my Wolf howl
Definitely makes my Wolf howl
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
10th Oct 2019 7:42pm
giggles thank you graciously dearest poet I'm happy this appealed to you... I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
10th Oct 2019 8:20pm
Very nice smoky bar room kind of noir guys. It reminds me a bit of John Feddeler. Hope we will hear from him again. <3
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Re: Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
11th Oct 2019 4:07am
thank you graciously dearest Daniel whenever I write noir style I think of John... I hope we do too he is missed...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
I do believe I've commented already regarding the poetic synchronicity you two share with each collab. This one was hot as all holy hell. You both pour your demons in the shaker along with 100 proof liquor and stir in the carnal ecstasy! Since his writing is no longer here, I put yours on my list because, fuck - it deserves to be there. If not his, there now, then yours!🔥 I always try to alternate with my adds because of that damn count restriction.
I can't wait till he returns so you guys can create art out heartache & debauchery. Pandy loves you both...and that last freaking stanza!😮❤
I can't wait till he returns so you guys can create art out heartache & debauchery. Pandy loves you both...and that last freaking stanza!😮❤
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