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Love Haiku #1

The universe in your eyes
Illuminated
The beauty of life in me
AspergerPoet56
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Re. Love Haiku #1
7th Oct 2019 12:39pm
Both elegant and eloquent! Good one!
Silver_Birch
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Re. Love Haiku #1
7th Oct 2019 4:18pm
Beautiful haiku AP.
Summerrain75
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Re. Love Haiku #1
7th Oct 2019 5:23pm
Another elegant piece!
PandoraUnleashed
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Re. Love Haiku #1
7th Oct 2019 6:17pm
beautiful sentiment wonderfully expressed in this short piece, AP :)
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