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when you think it's gone
I poke blood to the surface
refresh that old bruise
I poke blood to the surface
refresh that old bruise
Published 4th Oct 2019
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4th Oct 2019 6:37pm
Visceral piece. Is this a metaphorical or actual bruise? And is it on you on you or another? You I love poems, like this one, that quickly pierce the heart of the matter.
4th Oct 2019 8:41pm
Those are good questions.... and I'll just say, it is what it is.
Thanks for engaging!
Thanks for engaging!
4th Oct 2019 8:45pm
4th Oct 2019 10:02pm
you have a lot packed into this small suit case, very engaging and open to the reader, very nice
5th Oct 2019 2:22am
Thank you! I'm glad you found it open. It's cool when something that starts out very specific in my mind ends up having a whole bunch of different interpretations. We all bring something unique....
5th Oct 2019 4:08am
5th Oct 2019 4:18am
