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The wind blew warm
The wind blew warm
waking people up, who slept in the garden
high wire walkers falling
broken
when new words are spoken
shouting out hate and hate and hate
into the silence of love
when war came the sky was blue
a beautiful Autumn day
I knew it wouldn’t be long but I couldn’t stop
I sang my song
waking people up, who slept in the garden
high wire walkers falling
broken
when new words are spoken
shouting out hate and hate and hate
into the silence of love
when war came the sky was blue
a beautiful Autumn day
I knew it wouldn’t be long but I couldn’t stop
I sang my song
Published 25th Sep 2019
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25th Sep 2019 1:22pm
Second stanza, the image of the funambulist, is intriguing. The repeat of hate and solitary line following are well rendered. Close has impact. Been over it a few times, considering.
