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Competition Piece : Classic Corner Tribute - Rupi Kaur pt. II
for the girl with the lovely curves and all the insecurities
you are a beautiful miracle
for the girl with the scar-covered wrists
you are good enough
for the girl who loves too deeply even when they're not deserving
you deserve so much more
for the girl who flinches at her own reflection in the mirror
look a little closer
for the girl about to throw herself into the darkness
open the blinds, let in the sun
for the girl who goes to sleep each night hoping for a brighter tomorrow
you are not alone
- i have been her, and i still am.
you are a beautiful miracle
for the girl with the scar-covered wrists
you are good enough
for the girl who loves too deeply even when they're not deserving
you deserve so much more
for the girl who flinches at her own reflection in the mirror
look a little closer
for the girl about to throw herself into the darkness
open the blinds, let in the sun
for the girl who goes to sleep each night hoping for a brighter tomorrow
you are not alone
- i have been her, and i still am.
Published 19th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Second and last entry for the 'the sun and her flowers' competition. It came so naturally after reading some of her works... It had to be shared.
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2019 9:29am
A lovely entry to the Classic Kaur challenge. I think you have Rupi pegged.
19th Sep 2019 9:52am
That is so very nice to read, Johnny. :) It's easy to find her in my own words at any given time.
Delanee.
Delanee.
19th Sep 2019 12:04pm
What a wonderful second offering, Delanee. I love that you incorporated yourself. It is very reflective of the inspirational poem. Well done and best of luck in the comp!
19th Sep 2019 3:40pm
Thank you, Ahavati. I tried to make it my own, but still have it reflect the inspiration that served for it indeed. I'm glad you seem to think I have succeeded. :)
Delanee
Delanee
21st Sep 2019 11:51pm
Delaney, love reading this advice to women who struggle with self image. Your words were beautiful in their support for your sisters. Love where this took me on a lonely afternoon. John
23rd Sep 2019 1:50pm
Always welcome to my poems on lonely or rainy days. :) and any other day.
I really appreciate your comment and reading list add. It means a lot!
Delanee.
I really appreciate your comment and reading list add. It means a lot!
Delanee.
23rd Sep 2019 1:10pm
24th Sep 2019 10:13am
