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Monsters inside me...
Put your lips in my mouth... I wana taste your sin...
Swallow the desire to keep you within my skin...
As my body trembles... My mind rekindles...
The FlaMe that drives me inSaNe...
As I sort through the mess... We continue to undress ... The rest...
Of our DeMoNs... Soaked in your SeMoN... I'm believin...
Everything you say... So let us PrAy... Into the night...
As it slips away.. It brings forth a new day...
And I love you still... It almost has me wanting to KiLL...
The MoNsters iNSide Me...
Swallow the desire to keep you within my skin...
As my body trembles... My mind rekindles...
The FlaMe that drives me inSaNe...
As I sort through the mess... We continue to undress ... The rest...
Of our DeMoNs... Soaked in your SeMoN... I'm believin...
Everything you say... So let us PrAy... Into the night...
As it slips away.. It brings forth a new day...
And I love you still... It almost has me wanting to KiLL...
The MoNsters iNSide Me...
Published 19th Dec 2011
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19th Dec 2011 1:48pm
sometimes have hidden demons beneath our veneer of personality, Devilish and you said that so well.
Anonymous
19th Dec 2011 2:53pm
sexy and hot - just the way we like it in the night - very much enjoyed - respectfully - ^v^
19th Dec 2011 3:54pm
Because the term "demon" can be associated with things seen and unseen, this allows the reader to bring his/her own experiences into how to decipher this work. Very well done!
19th Dec 2011 11:05pm
Thank you very much for all your feed back.. I appreciate you reading my work. I shall return the favor with a quickness..
Anonymous
20th Dec 2011 2:17pm
Nice witty piece, with the added mystic sensuality, good on you!
20th Dec 2011 7:44pm
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Anonymous
2nd Mar 2012 3:50pm
This is delicious and evokes the dark part of me that gets dangerous when unleashed.
Brutal. Explicit. I adored it.
Brutal. Explicit. I adored it.
2nd Mar 2012 4:06pm
Thank you very much i appreciate that coming from you .. i read your poem off hand in the forum a lil while ago and was truly impressed. i wasnt able to write my own after that...lol. thank you.
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2012 4:29pm
Really? ... Gosh. Now i'm embaressed. Haha!
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