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Before The Fall
Diffused
delivered
deciphered
nights drawn cool;
warmth poached away
when weekend comes
we rest,
or chase the day
- back -
out of sight
-n-
into night
moonbeams
meadows
majesty
take me any way;
before breaths
can no longer stand
before they no longer lunge
or linger in your hand
- be my strength -
my guide, my arrow
pull me back before I bend
hold me taught
let's not pretend
life won't let go
come
don't let go
delivered
deciphered
nights drawn cool;
warmth poached away
when weekend comes
we rest,
or chase the day
- back -
out of sight
-n-
into night
moonbeams
meadows
majesty
take me any way;
before breaths
can no longer stand
before they no longer lunge
or linger in your hand
- be my strength -
my guide, my arrow
pull me back before I bend
hold me taught
let's not pretend
life won't let go
come
don't let go
Published 7th Sep 2019
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7th Sep 2019 5:02pm
7th Sep 2019 5:09pm
loved the imagery and delivery Tim...
you have a knack of taking us there into that moment
you have a knack of taking us there into that moment
7th Sep 2019 9:22pm
You wrote a great piece in few words man sometimes simple is just the way to go hell yeah good write.
8th Sep 2019 12:14pm
Delivery the way I dig it!!!
Great stuff Tim, glad to see You Good Sir.
This Write felt like moving forward, perfect for my morn.!!!
Great stuff Tim, glad to see You Good Sir.
This Write felt like moving forward, perfect for my morn.!!!
Oh Tim! Thank you for this. It is lovely!
"moonbeams
meadows
majesty"
Who could want anymore?
I love this!
"moonbeams
meadows
majesty"
Who could want anymore?
I love this!
Anonymous
10th Sep 2019 3:24pm
Reading this felt almost like listening to the tide roll in...and out. or wind across fields of grass. It breathes. Lovely...
