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Submissions and Cravings
Weak to your presence
these connections arouse
prickly skin from my stubble
beyond the gate of that blouse
points teasingly rigid
beg the call of my tongue
shifting my purpose
to engage you to cum
In quick little teases
and a light little clamp
the fruits of my labour
get you increasingly damp
I follow those eyes
in that sly, mute direction
to work down that body
and continue this session
The evidence slides
from the length of your leg
the stamp of a memory
soon to be made
Gliding up from the bottom
to graze the worthiest jewel
the symmetry followed
to ensure you don't cool
Beautifully wide
a sweet moan to respond
and my devious intent
to induce you to long
Feeling you shatter
keeping firm to my face
granting me privilege
to develop my taste
these connections arouse
prickly skin from my stubble
beyond the gate of that blouse
points teasingly rigid
beg the call of my tongue
shifting my purpose
to engage you to cum
In quick little teases
and a light little clamp
the fruits of my labour
get you increasingly damp
I follow those eyes
in that sly, mute direction
to work down that body
and continue this session
The evidence slides
from the length of your leg
the stamp of a memory
soon to be made
Gliding up from the bottom
to graze the worthiest jewel
the symmetry followed
to ensure you don't cool
Beautifully wide
a sweet moan to respond
and my devious intent
to induce you to long
Feeling you shatter
keeping firm to my face
granting me privilege
to develop my taste
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Re. Submissions and Cravings
2nd Sep 2019 10:49pm
This was f'ng AMAZING! The two strongest of already strong stanzas, are...
"The evidence slides
from the length of your leg
the stamp of a memory
soon to be made "
....omg, what an awesome way to put that!
"Feeling you shatter
keeping firm to my face
granting me privilege
to develop my taste"
....But this one, just the mere mentioning of it being a priviledge cranks up the intensity & sensuality. I used something a lonnnng time ago about the bj being an honor to taste their soul. So I know the realm your mind was in. It makes it more divine and once again, cums that Tender One!;)
"The evidence slides
from the length of your leg
the stamp of a memory
soon to be made "
....omg, what an awesome way to put that!
"Feeling you shatter
keeping firm to my face
granting me privilege
to develop my taste"
....But this one, just the mere mentioning of it being a priviledge cranks up the intensity & sensuality. I used something a lonnnng time ago about the bj being an honor to taste their soul. So I know the realm your mind was in. It makes it more divine and once again, cums that Tender One!;)
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
3rd Sep 2019 00:49am
Thank you for such an astute reading and the kindest of praise. Got into the flow of the rhyme, despite the obvious twists in mind. The RL add is always an added bonus. It seemed like a fitting conclusion. And I do think I recall that poem you referenced. Happy such things can be seen as "divine".
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
3rd Sep 2019 00:50am
Re. Submissions and Cravings
4th Sep 2019 00:44am
points teasingly rigid
beg the call of my tongue
shifting my purpose
to engage you to cum
"Such gratifying stanzas for the softest of intentions, very mesmerizing words, Tenderloin
beg the call of my tongue
shifting my purpose
to engage you to cum
"Such gratifying stanzas for the softest of intentions, very mesmerizing words, Tenderloin
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
4th Sep 2019 00:46am
Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
4th Sep 2019 00:57am
Never, that stimulating sensation is doctor ordered and must be surrendered under a nurse's bedside manner.... wink
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
4th Sep 2019 4:38am
I certainly like the sound of that. Good thing I was distracted from the mission and was finally admitted for observation. I sure hope she arrives soon. ;)
Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
4th Sep 2019 5:17pm
Stilettoes off, garter slid down legs, thigh high stockings rolled down, bra, thong, seductively discarded... walking over to my eager patient... I think we need to close the blinds for this private nursing duty... *sighs*
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
4th Sep 2019 6:45pm
Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
9th Sep 2019 5:30pm
Don't worry, I will give your remedy in such sweet small dosages... therefore, you won't overdose on the administering flavor
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
I am in need of such medicine. And the slower the dose the more I can savour. Mmmm.
Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
9th Sep 2019 7:00pm
You are... I'm speechless... mmm... you're good, to the point of surrendering... :-)
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
9th Sep 2019 8:41pm
Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
13th Sep 2019 1:44am
Humm... I think I have to use the straddling method for hard measures that refuse to subside...and I think that shall do it...I think it's working... oh...yes... right there.. mmhum….oh yes…don't....freaking.... move.... just take the seepage of your medicine real slow.. you can move now ….feeling better now😉
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Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
13th Sep 2019 2:19am
That is working wonders. A true healing moving beyond the call of duty. Oh...fits so good.
Re: Re. Submissions and Cravings
13th Sep 2019 3:27am
I'm glad my holistic methods has met the comforts of my patient's therapeutic convalesce; you shall get my bill, how you repay is strictly confidential and between patient and nurse....take care
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17th Sep 2019 9:25pm
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17th Sep 2019 11:23pm