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Drink Me If You're Lonely~with the sexy HighlyFunctional
reach for me, pull me down
pour me over the cold
pieces of your heart
twirl your pain into
my amber shades
for just this night
I am your mistress
let your secrets seep
into my hollow spaces
whiskey spirits seduce
darkness ignites
burning on the way down
rise to fill me
an unmeasured pour
sinful rivers cascade
between my breasts
whisper deviant desires
unspeakable in the daylight
bend me to your lusts
beating back midnights
with each thrust defeating the pain
carrying wicked promises
of no more loneliness
and no tomorrows
Published 1st Sep 2019
Author's Note
thank you dearest HF for creating with me this was a real pleasure 😈
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1st Sep 2019 4:57pm
super sensual spill
You both are sooooooooooooooo................no words ( Wow! )
You both are sooooooooooooooo................no words ( Wow! )
1st Sep 2019 5:03pm
thank you from us both most graciously dearest Tallen HF really is a very unique and talented writer...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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1st Sep 2019 5:13pm
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1st Sep 2019 5:15pm
1st Sep 2019 7:26pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
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1st Sep 2019 5:20pm
thank you dearest poet from us both I promise you my loneliness is real... love and sex isn't easy even if its sought for a temporary relief like whiskey ❤
love Brenda
love Brenda
1st Sep 2019 5:37pm
1st Sep 2019 6:04pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim from us both... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
1st Sep 2019 5:52pm
Wow, this was just a gorgeous collaboration. It spills all over you and the emotion is so sexy with that hint of sadness and the catharsis of burying our pain, both literally and figuratively, is amazing. Lovely write!
1st Sep 2019 6:11pm
thank you graciously beautiful Luna from us both for the love on this write... you are deeply appreciated...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
1st Sep 2019 7:13pm
Two talents i hold in the highest regards. I knew this would be an amazing write the second i saw it but today youve both blew what i thought out of the water youve truely outdone yourselves
1st Sep 2019 8:23pm
thank you most graciously dearest Liam from us both... I'm deeply honored...
love Brenda 💕❤💕
love Brenda 💕❤💕
1st Sep 2019 8:31pm
Same comment as on HF's post because it deserves equal praise. ❤️
Love how the same poem can sound so different even when two different poets post and format them. That nuance makes it even more interesting.
Very, very well done, you two!
Delanee.
Love how the same poem can sound so different even when two different poets post and format them. That nuance makes it even more interesting.
Very, very well done, you two!
Delanee.
7th Sep 2019 1:47pm
thank you beautiful Delanee I'm happy we chose to present it differently because I think it works... I'm happy you feel it too... I cherish your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
1st Sep 2019 10:02pm
Very unique spill from the two of you
7th Sep 2019 1:47pm
2nd Sep 2019 1:15am
"Beating back midnights," and welcoming fine poetry. Excellent work from you both.
7th Sep 2019 1:48pm
2nd Sep 2019 2:33am
Well dont mind if I have another fucking whiskey straight up holy hotness you 2! List. <3
7th Sep 2019 1:49pm
giggles bottoms up beautiful Mysterious One thank you from us both...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
5th Sep 2019 5:34pm
7th Sep 2019 1:49pm
7th Sep 2019 10:03pm
Lay it down damn you wrote the hell out of this one. Kinda makes you wish you was highlyfunctional. Im more dysfunctional.
7th Sep 2019 10:06pm
oh thank you graciously from us both wish I could take full credit for this one but the true mastermind was the awesome poet Highlyfunctional this is a collaboration... I'm so happy you liked it... I deeply appreciate your beautiful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
7th Sep 2019 10:08pm
7th Sep 2019 10:12pm
thank you again and welcome to DU I hope you enjoy your stay you'll find it can be addicting I think as most of us did... writing is a high all it's own and the interactive nature of the site is wicked cool... I'm happy you found your way here ❤
7th Sep 2019 10:14pm
7th Sep 2019 10:18pm
12th Sep 2019 4:06am
Here I am trying to catch up & damn it.. do you two rock the words & emotions brilliantly! And you naughty girl.. I read HF's authors note..drink me if you're lonely. This collab was hot as hell & if you're Queen, HF's now King.😏 His poetry has soared since meeting you & now one of our biggest stars, I truly think you helped light a fire!;) Pandy loves you both...❤
12th Sep 2019 4:37am
aw thank you graciously beautiful Pandora from us both... he truly is a masterful writer I come at him with ideas and he spins gold out of them... I love writing with him... you honor me greatly beautiful one...
love you...
Brenda 🌹❤🌹❤
love you...
Brenda 🌹❤🌹❤
2nd Oct 2019 2:55am
WOW, this is smooth drinking Brenda/HF! Many collobs are bumpy in the transitions but this is seamless. So sensual. Steam rises off the page. Love it!
-Minxy❣
-Minxy❣
