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Open Letter
Dear Darling
pave my road not to be gravel
it is dusty and curved,
no lights, its all dark
your heart compass
improves my sailing,
directing, my boat not to sink.
Endless Journey
as i travel,
be my paramedic
in my accidents
your Soul
My part
pave my road not to be gravel
it is dusty and curved,
no lights, its all dark
your heart compass
improves my sailing,
directing, my boat not to sink.
Endless Journey
as i travel,
be my paramedic
in my accidents
your Soul
My part
Published 29th Aug 2019
Author's Note
Darling - referring to my mind ( brains).
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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29th Aug 2019 11:10am
NICELY DONE...NEVER LEAVE HOME WITHOUT IT FOR YOUR MIND IS YOUR MOST POWERFUL WEAPON
29th Aug 2019 12:59pm
30th Aug 2019 11:04am
30th Aug 2019 11:04am
29th Aug 2019 2:24pm
I like everything about this piece of work. This comes off easy for you. Great job.
29th Aug 2019 2:58pm
30th Aug 2019 1:32pm
4th Sep 2019 6:15am
3rd Sep 2019 9:16pm
Love the ending "be the paramedic in my accidents", whoever that person, they'll be there for you.
Welcome to DUP.
Welcome to DUP.
4th Sep 2019 8:49am
5th Sep 2019 5:48pm
Love the opening stanza in this. It paints a picture that sticks in the mind. Nice one.
10th Apr 2020 4:41am
Unekhono elihle
As always you give us images that are unforgettable and rememberable
Mhlobo uziphathe kahle
As always you give us images that are unforgettable and rememberable
Mhlobo uziphathe kahle
