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Amazing grace
The direct reward I am receiving is perfect.I believe.Serene tranquility.Supreme topping on a dream.The agility I am seeing to intervene is astonishing.This can set me free.The picture hass started developing.
Published 29th Aug 2019
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29th Aug 2019 5:23am
Not trying to change Your style
but try spilling in separate thoughts and spaces
and line spaces between a thought or Feel?
The direct reward I am receiving is perfect.
I believe. Serene tranquility.
Supreme topping on a dream.
The agility I am seeing to intervene is astonishing.
This can set me free.
The picture has
started
developing.
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Anyways,
easier to read?
I still like Your writing but still not in favor of the format
but try spilling in separate thoughts and spaces
and line spaces between a thought or Feel?
The direct reward I am receiving is perfect.
I believe. Serene tranquility.
Supreme topping on a dream.
The agility I am seeing to intervene is astonishing.
This can set me free.
The picture has
started
developing.
----------------------------------
Anyways,
easier to read?
I still like Your writing but still not in favor of the format
29th Aug 2019 5:55am
29th Aug 2019 5:56am
30th Aug 2019 9:51pm
3rd Sep 2019 9:50pm
To piggy back on Ahavati, I also sensed internal rhyme so by structuring in certain ways we feel that delivery smoothly and emotionally.
Great ink.
Great ink.
11th Jan 2020 3:24pm
