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Mid September
Geese fly in
a V shape
across an
endless
aqua sky,
broken only
by the stain
of trees in the
blue distance
Meadows of
wild daisies
and goldenrod
moved by the
wings of
stinging
creatures
Georgian
chants of crickets
droning...
...the end of
summer
...the end of
summer
...the end of
all things
Written by
buddhakitty
Published 26th Aug 2019
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Re. Mid September
26th Aug 2019 12:48pm
I know some people really hate to see summer go - this epitomizes that wonderfully, Kitty. I particularly enjoyed
moved by the
wings of
stinging
creatures
That was just stunning. It all was soothing yet with an undercurrent of melancholy.
moved by the
wings of
stinging
creatures
That was just stunning. It all was soothing yet with an undercurrent of melancholy.
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Re: Re. Mid September
26th Aug 2019 12:59pm
You humble me greatly Ahvanti. Thank you for your kindness and support.
big hugs,
buddhakitty.
big hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. Mid September
26th Aug 2019 3:23pm
Beautiful ode to summer!
Dont think of it as an end
just another beginning. ❤
Dont think of it as an end
just another beginning. ❤
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Re: Re. Mid September
26th Aug 2019 6:51pm
Re: Re. Mid September
26th Aug 2019 6:53pm
Circles within circles nikkimoe. Thanks for the thoughts.
hugs,
buddhakitty .
hugs,
buddhakitty .
Re. Mid September
26th Aug 2019 6:08pm
Lovely ode to summer... your visuals are just superb...
"Georgian
chants of crickets
droning"
is especially compelling...to me...
as I once lived
just down the mountain from a Georgian Monastery... hugs, Ely
"Georgian
chants of crickets
droning"
is especially compelling...to me...
as I once lived
just down the mountain from a Georgian Monastery... hugs, Ely
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Re: Re. Mid September
27th Aug 2019 00:15am
Re. Mid September
27th Aug 2019 3:05pm
Re: Re. Mid September
27th Aug 2019 4:02pm
Today, it is cool, overcast and rainy. Nature has provided a overture to what is heading our way.
pax,
buddhakitty .
pax,
buddhakitty .