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The Palms
The palm trees pulled me in
as I watched each wave roll out
movement performed with precision
in a new found serenity
on a blanket we lie in the distance
a place only the breeze can find
the sun erupting before us
leaving all troubles behind
kisses of salt grace our palate
along with the rim of our drinks
day moves but we remain patient
a time to recharge and not think
as I watched each wave roll out
movement performed with precision
in a new found serenity
on a blanket we lie in the distance
a place only the breeze can find
the sun erupting before us
leaving all troubles behind
kisses of salt grace our palate
along with the rim of our drinks
day moves but we remain patient
a time to recharge and not think
Published 25th Aug 2019
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25th Aug 2019 4:27pm
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25th Aug 2019 10:35pm
"The sun erupting before us" is my favorite line, but fine work in its entirety.
25th Aug 2019 10:35pm
"The sun erupting before us" is my favorite line, but fine work in its entirety.
Anonymous
26th Aug 2019 6:54am
Ugh, the palm trees!
There`s so many here ...
it was the idea
of beaches that pulled me in ...
💖
Anonymous
26th Aug 2019 3:15pm
Talk about an idyllic moment. I think I need a vacation...
