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ordinary
V
Hush.
Vibration on
bone.
Canvas stained
abstractions.
Lay on
hands.
Flesh parted.
Swallow...
new Eucharist.
Published 25th Aug 2019
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25th Aug 2019 2:39pm
The body and blood take on an entirely different meaning in this one, Kitty.
Well done. xo
Well done. xo
25th Aug 2019 2:48pm
Oh yes it does! Writing about sex without writing about sex.
hug,
buddhakitty.
hug,
buddhakitty.
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
25th Aug 2019 6:52pm
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25th Aug 2019 9:12pm
27th Aug 2019 3:03pm
27th Aug 2019 4:00pm
Thank you Anna. It is difficult to write about sex in metaphor that is not insipid or cliche.
pax,
buddhakitty.
pax,
buddhakitty.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
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