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the evil night
♪a rhymed double octet♪
what were this world if no one loved
and no one k n e w compassion
where would the hungry go
what would be the plight
of l o n e l y souls
the n a k e d
wear what
clothes
what if no human heart were moved
to save the poor a r a t i o n
no hands to soothe the blow
of t h e e v i l n i g h t
when darkness holds
the languid
c o m a -
tose
© Copyright 2019 August 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
what were this world if no one loved
and no one k n e w compassion
where would the hungry go
what would be the plight
of l o n e l y souls
the n a k e d
wear what
clothes
what if no human heart were moved
to save the poor a r a t i o n
no hands to soothe the blow
of t h e e v i l n i g h t
when darkness holds
the languid
c o m a -
tose
© Copyright 2019 August 24
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 25th Aug 2019
| Edited 2nd Sep 2019
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25th Aug 2019 12:59pm
I don't even want to think about that. I often worry about the elderly now; how they afford to eat, heating in the winter, and so forth. And the children. Children are always the true victims of poverty and war.
Solid write, Cabcool.
Solid write, Cabcool.
I feel the pain you feel, Ahavati; obviously, it's my pain too.
It's great to have someone with whom to commiserate. The issues are real and we can only fulfill the Great Commission by seeking and bringing mercy and justice for the borderline citizens of the world -- especially those who are victims of birth into a careless, carefree and care-not world (the children).
Thanks for consolidating with me.
Sincerely
cab
It's great to have someone with whom to commiserate. The issues are real and we can only fulfill the Great Commission by seeking and bringing mercy and justice for the borderline citizens of the world -- especially those who are victims of birth into a careless, carefree and care-not world (the children).
Thanks for consolidating with me.
Sincerely
cab
25th Aug 2019 5:33pm
"...when darkness holds
the languid
c o m a -
tose ..."
So much power in a single statement.
Very, very cool Mr. Cab. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
the languid
c o m a -
tose ..."
So much power in a single statement.
Very, very cool Mr. Cab. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
25th Aug 2019 7:26pm
Thank you, LostGirl.
I've FOUND your comments here and elsewhere rather encouraging.
Your wry sense of humour (elsewhere, perhaps) adds flavour to the bite. Much appreciated.
I find you're not LOST, after all, GIRL!
Sincerely
cab
I've FOUND your comments here and elsewhere rather encouraging.
Your wry sense of humour (elsewhere, perhaps) adds flavour to the bite. Much appreciated.
I find you're not LOST, after all, GIRL!
Sincerely
cab
25th Aug 2019 6:46pm
25th Aug 2019 7:31pm
What a distinct honour!
My late fellow Jamaican Bob Marley kept company with the prophets and chewed on the words of National Hero Marcus Garvey, when he sang, "Emancipate yourself from mental slavery..."
Miles to go before i reach...
Thank you, Liam.
Sincerely
cab
My late fellow Jamaican Bob Marley kept company with the prophets and chewed on the words of National Hero Marcus Garvey, when he sang, "Emancipate yourself from mental slavery..."
Miles to go before i reach...
Thank you, Liam.
Sincerely
cab
