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In My Opinion

I was asked
What I think the difference between
Sex and making love is?

Then she said she can still feel me
inside her

Even though it’s been years
Since I was there

That’s making love to me...

Making love is that deep connection
Penetration of the mind
Heart
Long before the body

The body connection
Is all the elements coming together

Consummating the buildup
Engaged in the presence
Living and loving the present
Consumed in each other
And never wanting to separate

Sex is just the vehicle
Making Love
Is so much more
Written by Absence
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Author's Note
A conversation I actually had today with an ex.
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