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Anonymous
20th Aug 2019 1:40am
...words said
and
unsaid...this is our thread...
Yeah, like that!
and
unsaid...this is our thread...
Yeah, like that!
20th Aug 2019 1:45am
There is so much left unsaid in our silence.
..YEAH like that. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
..YEAH like that. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
20th Aug 2019 1:46am
20th Aug 2019 1:54am
I continue to purr longingly into the distance.
Thanks for MEOWing with me, kitty kat.
Yours,
LostGirl
Thanks for MEOWing with me, kitty kat.
Yours,
LostGirl
20th Aug 2019 4:21am
the night is dark...ur words move as stealthily as the cat lurking in the alley.. like a hunter waiting for his kill...can you be my predator
20th Aug 2019 4:23am
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20th Aug 2019 4:29am
20th Aug 2019 4:30am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
20th Aug 2019 7:15am
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20th Aug 2019 7:25pm
Thank you, HF. Your comment is lovely.
“The tilde looks like a stitch!”
It’s all about the details as I’m sure you know. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
P.S. My bed is yours.
“The tilde looks like a stitch!”
It’s all about the details as I’m sure you know. (;
Yours,
LostGirl
P.S. My bed is yours.
20th Aug 2019 12:53pm
20th Aug 2019 7:27pm
Thanks, lady A!
That is a very high compliment coming from you. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
That is a very high compliment coming from you. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
20th Aug 2019 7:06pm
A perfect haiku, I love the layout and such passion exhibited in so few words :-)))))))
Excellent Ink :-)))))))
Excellent Ink :-)))))))
20th Aug 2019 7:28pm
Thank you David. What can I say? Passion is what I’m about.
Very flattered you noticed. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
Very flattered you noticed. (:
Yours,
LostGirl
21st Aug 2019 11:38pm
Not only are the words thought provoking but the layout is a work of art too.
22nd Aug 2019 00:08am
25th Aug 2019 5:40pm
25th Aug 2019 6:00pm
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
25th Aug 2019 6:11pm
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25th Aug 2019 6:13pm
28th Aug 2019 11:19pm
I don't think I've seen a haiku crafted like this to pause and have more depth.
Excellent ink!
Excellent ink!
28th Aug 2019 11:53pm
Thanks Wally. (:
Depth and pause are what I'm aiming for. Long empty spaces for the silence..
I really appreciate your feedback, lovely.
Yours,
LostGirl
Depth and pause are what I'm aiming for. Long empty spaces for the silence..
I really appreciate your feedback, lovely.
Yours,
LostGirl
29th Aug 2019 5:59am
What is not written in your hand
leaves imagination in command
poem structure has appeal
deciphering the motive and zeal
leaves imagination in command
poem structure has appeal
deciphering the motive and zeal
