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‘Twas Sir always liked me in red.
His dainty submissive he learned
Was partial to Sir’s tastes in bed,
To dress me in what he preferred.
We both found this out early on;
‘Twas Sir always liked me in red.
So first we would fuck until dawn,
Then left to go shopping instead.
The lingerie went to my head,
The dresses, the accessories.
‘Twas Sir always liked me in red,
His money kept growing on trees.
But lately we’d fuck in the nude,
I shot him last night in the head.
The sight of the blood on my dude,
‘Twas Sir always liked me in red.
Published 14th Aug 2019
| Edited 16th Aug 2019
Author's Note
For Missy’s Clothed competition.
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
14th Aug 2019 8:58pm
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14th Aug 2019 9:43pm
Dear J-P,
The last stanza had me burst out loud laughing!
The entire poem read like a fine RED wine! Smooth and velvety with a slight pinch of sass! Beautifully done! Best of luck in the comp. H🌷
The last stanza had me burst out loud laughing!
The entire poem read like a fine RED wine! Smooth and velvety with a slight pinch of sass! Beautifully done! Best of luck in the comp. H🌷
Heheh, thank you, dear H, you got it right on point. I had fun writing this piece, and you picked up on that fun, good girl.
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14th Aug 2019 11:01pm
14th Aug 2019 11:41pm
16th Aug 2019 1:54am
15th Aug 2019 00:22am
I’m honored and my thanks, dear kitty, for your words of support & appreciation.
tiger hugs
Jade👠
tiger hugs
Jade👠
15th Aug 2019 4:25pm
Thank you, good Poet, and do you know why in this case?
Good to see you.
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Good to see you.
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2019 3:45pm
16th Aug 2019 00:32am
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Thank you for stopping in, Playdate, I’m glad to meet you, and that you appreciate my “wine” of choice.
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16th Aug 2019 00:35am
That last stanza second line came out of nowhere for me.
Great writing. Good luck in the comp.
Great writing. Good luck in the comp.
16th Aug 2019 3:50am
Hi Wally, and thank you for dropping by for a read and your comment.
Heheh... don’t you just love surprises?
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Heheh... don’t you just love surprises?
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
16th Aug 2019 5:09am
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Oh most excellent, Ethan, thank you. The sounds & visual you provided me were a real lift! Even right down to the soundtrack, wheeee!
gigglesnorts,
Jade👠
gigglesnorts,
Jade👠
26th May 2020 1:37pm
