Flashback     -- competition piece --

I saw this in the comp and thought it was quite profound. It lingered after I read it and I guess that’s the idea of the comp. Best of luck to you.  

Thank you for sharing.  

-M

That is a really great compliment, thank you Missy. :) That is very sweet of you.

Delanee.

Been there. Understand it perfectly.



buddhakitty.

I think most of us poets do. Thanks for the comment.

Delanee.

I saw it and was like "challenge accepted". :-)  Thank you for believing in my gift of few words, HF. So glad that you see multiple dimensions in such brevity.

Delanee.

I was wondering if you were going to enter, Delanee! Brevity is truly your niche, and this is no exception!

Thank you very much Ahavati. It's nice to see that people start to think of me when they see comps and stuff like these. Means a lot!

Delanee

Dear D,

You don’t need any luck for this, but I’ll wish it to you anyway.

As with Missy, this rattled around in my mind as well. I know we all experience these feelings before/during/after a breakup. However, the brevity and truth behind your words hit home with profound and raw emotion for me.
Fantastic write, once again I wish you the best in the comp!! H🌷