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Re. Mole 3.
9th Aug 2019 1:54pm
Jade these are terrific! I got tripped up on the last part - took me a minute but I got it. Very nice.
You should copyright and call them crossword puzzle poems. It's a great concept!
You should copyright and call them crossword puzzle poems. It's a great concept!
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9th Aug 2019 3:58pm
Thanks very much, Sage - yes this whole new thing I’ve been creating happened out of the blue.
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9th Aug 2019 8:31pm
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9th Aug 2019 5:08pm
Thank you, Ethan, for the RL honor, and for your advice. I wonder how far I’d go with my collection of three moles?📝
Just playing.✨
Just playing.✨
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9th Aug 2019 5:23pm
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I swear its like the poetic Davinci code. I love these so much 7 across 4 down ..what is the name of brilliance
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9th Aug 2019 5:11pm
Re. Mole 3.
9th Aug 2019 10:07pm
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10th Aug 2019 8:44am
Thank you, buddha sister, and I will... one mole at a time.😙
tiger hugs
Jade
tiger hugs
Jade
Re. Mole 3.
9th Aug 2019 10:13pm
As a marching band geek, this reminds me of drill writing incorporated into a themed show, looking for designs and formations that carry a message within the arrangement and visual effect.
Excellent stuff Jade.
Excellent stuff Jade.
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Wally😆! You’re a marching band geek? That takes me back to high school when I loved sitting on the sidelines in the bleachers wearing a hoody during early morning band practice... there was always a group of us kids watching.
I’m glad you like these. What instrument did you play?
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I’m glad you like these. What instrument did you play?
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10th Aug 2019 7:43pm
We have to travel back to the early 90's for that one. I was a snare player, drumline captain and drum major my sr. year. It was a lot of work, had a lot of fun, lot of friends (till this day).
So when I was reading these poems it reminds of the drill done by drum corps today, complex and very cool. It's like poetry in motion.
So when I was reading these poems it reminds of the drill done by drum corps today, complex and very cool. It's like poetry in motion.
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11th Aug 2019 00:11am
Gosh thank you, Wally - what a great reply. I was really loving it as I read.
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Re. Mole 3.
10th Aug 2019 00:25am
Dear J-P,
Extraordinary! It’s a poem within a poem and so touching to read the nuances inbetween hunting the clues! Love it! H🌷
Extraordinary! It’s a poem within a poem and so touching to read the nuances inbetween hunting the clues! Love it! H🌷
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10th Aug 2019 9:14am
Why thank you, dear H, I’m still amazed myself. I’m loving how this whole idea encouraged reader participation right from the start.
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10th Aug 2019 9:07am
*giggles* Thanks, Kathy!
I had to Google it.☺️
I admit - I never understood Rubix.😇
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I had to Google it.☺️
I admit - I never understood Rubix.😇
🔻J🔸P▪️
Re. Mole 3.
10th Aug 2019 9:54pm
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11th Aug 2019 11:38am
Thank you, tommy💌... and you’ve got a brain that’s able to grasp the ones I’ve done so far just like
SNAP!⚡️
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SNAP!⚡️
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Why thank you, HF, I very much appreciate that.
It’s still so new and raw. I’ve only done four so far - that’s 4 in 4. This one was exceptional = meaning, It says more and is about twice the size, and involved hours rather than minutes because of the size... but the results made it worthwhile.
My next might be this size, and I might redo Mole 4. to edit & expand. But I’ve also been up all night so I might not know what I’m talking about.😴
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It’s still so new and raw. I’ve only done four so far - that’s 4 in 4. This one was exceptional = meaning, It says more and is about twice the size, and involved hours rather than minutes because of the size... but the results made it worthwhile.
My next might be this size, and I might redo Mole 4. to edit & expand. But I’ve also been up all night so I might not know what I’m talking about.😴
🔻J🔸P▪️
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11th Aug 2019 11:41am