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sacred night
burning eyes of lies and death,
collapsing dreams of silent breath.
pulling the life out of distince,
army of souls under resestance.
crippled body soggs in murky and dust,
forever lost in the earths crust.
talking rituals in those eyes,
lallaby night of original lies.
to a new religon of all men kind,
world of horror with those of lost mind.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
collapsing dreams of silent breath.
pulling the life out of distince,
army of souls under resestance.
crippled body soggs in murky and dust,
forever lost in the earths crust.
talking rituals in those eyes,
lallaby night of original lies.
to a new religon of all men kind,
world of horror with those of lost mind.
-Kumiko Yamamoto
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Kumiko
15th Dec 2011 4:43am
When did you learn how to spell :p lol perfect poem "lallaby night of orginal lies" has to be the line of the night :)
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re: Kumiko
15th Dec 2011 5:24am
ok...let me tell you english is not my first language... if its such a big deal ill write them all in japanese ok :3 meow and i mean no harm when i say that
re: re: Kumiko
15th Dec 2011 6:14am
japanese is a beautiful language i wouldnt mind reading one when i learn it :)
and it doesnt matter how you spell it was a bautiful poem
and it doesnt matter how you spell it was a bautiful poem
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re: re: re: Kumiko
21st Dec 2011 1:52am
Hey Hey
Anonymous
15th Dec 2011 7:42am
and like light in the dark tunnel... its working ((smile)) I am so proud of you, you work so hard.
Well done my Japanese friend.
You ROCK!
love to you...
Al -x-
BTW. Did I say I like your lovely poem.
Well done my Japanese friend.
You ROCK!
love to you...
Al -x-
BTW. Did I say I like your lovely poem.
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re: Hey Hey
15th Dec 2011 8:12am
Hi Pretty Girl
15th Dec 2011 9:43am
re: Hi Pretty Girl
15th Dec 2011 7:01pm
dude!
17th Dec 2011 7:47pm
dude you dark poetry is fucking crazy you know I actually shed a tear.keep the darkness flowing
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re: dude!
17th Dec 2011 8:00pm
hey
18th Dec 2011 6:30am
re: hey
18th Dec 2011 5:36pm
It sound good
19th Dec 2011 1:39pm
You nailed rhythm and content. I think I share your way of seeing things. EMO style?
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re: It sound good
19th Dec 2011 7:30pm
alex
Anonymous
4th Jan 2012 5:18am
i love the first two lines.
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re: oh wow
8th Mar 2012 5:59am