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Trust
You may as well have said "You're cheating on me aren't you?"
And just to end the conversation,
I would have lied and said
"Yes."
And just to end the conversation,
I would have lied and said
"Yes."
Published 6th Aug 2019
| Edited 8th Aug 2019
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2019 1:16pm
Seriously, the meat of the poem is the final 4 lines which could survive without the rest.
[title]Trust[/title]
You may as well have said,
"You're cheating on me aren't you?"
And just to end the conversation,
I would have lied and said
"Yes."
There. That's it. All you need. The rest is like the lettuce you really don't want on the bacon cheeseburger.
It's a kick ass poem nonetheless.
[title]Trust[/title]
You may as well have said,
"You're cheating on me aren't you?"
And just to end the conversation,
I would have lied and said
"Yes."
There. That's it. All you need. The rest is like the lettuce you really don't want on the bacon cheeseburger.
It's a kick ass poem nonetheless.
