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the reasons I hated you

your smile was too bright
for me not to smile
in response

your eyes were too deep
for me not to fall
in them

your vibes
were so Mick Jagger
or some punk-rock guy

your clothes were too black
if black could be
too much

your voice was too loud
for me so I just
covered my ears

but the reasons I hated you
became the reasons I loved you
Written by iamdaria (saturn)
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