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godfather and his dog haus
ole rob is talking
all that blah blah blah
steady stream of chinglish
from godfather Russia
there’s drugs all on the table
the liquor is running out
oh to be a fly on the wall
and see what it’s all about
a straight up mad bin
walking around talking trash
damn, get back to the dog house
with your shit talking ass
fuck, did you even hear what he said
spitting deep shit in four languages
something about the bloody universe
and no sleep cause we’re all savages
oh, to be a fly on that wall
think I got a little contact buzz
weed and cigarette smoke curling
can’t nobody shut the fuck up
we’ve got one in the corner
another over there philosophizing
and god, they all talk at once
my brain is straight up splicing
this is the mad dog’s haus
one is even in a real dog house
and no i don’t care to leave
but I guess I have to let him out
take your ass to bed already
been on this wall for four fucking days
i’m so ready to close my eyes
but not ready to end the haze
all that blah blah blah
steady stream of chinglish
from godfather Russia
there’s drugs all on the table
the liquor is running out
oh to be a fly on the wall
and see what it’s all about
a straight up mad bin
walking around talking trash
damn, get back to the dog house
with your shit talking ass
fuck, did you even hear what he said
spitting deep shit in four languages
something about the bloody universe
and no sleep cause we’re all savages
oh, to be a fly on that wall
think I got a little contact buzz
weed and cigarette smoke curling
can’t nobody shut the fuck up
we’ve got one in the corner
another over there philosophizing
and god, they all talk at once
my brain is straight up splicing
this is the mad dog’s haus
one is even in a real dog house
and no i don’t care to leave
but I guess I have to let him out
take your ass to bed already
been on this wall for four fucking days
i’m so ready to close my eyes
but not ready to end the haze
Published 21st Jul 2019
Author's Note
Channeling my inner CarpeNoct!
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21st Jul 2019 7:31pm
21st Jul 2019 7:56pm
21st Jul 2019 9:14pm
Brava Liv! You're showing some serious range here. The language is de rigueur for the scene and has a noir sensibility.
21st Jul 2019 9:40pm
Thanks so much, Gahddess! The language was a channeling of another poet I quasi-idolize.
21st Jul 2019 9:52pm
22nd Jul 2019 12:17pm
22nd Jul 2019 9:03pm
I'm glad you think so, Alan! Thanks for stopping in to read and comment on this different write of mine :)
22nd Jul 2019 11:09pm
And yet it seems you are part of this 'shit' conversation between them, in the poem.
Sounds like you just want some peace though.
Did you manage to get your views across or did the males just dominate the whole Universe thing?
Sounds like you just want some peace though.
Did you manage to get your views across or did the males just dominate the whole Universe thing?
22nd Jul 2019 11:12pm
Haha, it’s all in good fun! Yes, I am part of it now I suppose. I’m always heard, I’m a woman hahaha
Anonymous
29th Jul 2019 8:40pm
This one has some serious movement going on in it. That would be sensory overload for me. Be crawling in the dog house and hiding from all the sound. Lol, much enjoyed this
30th Jul 2019 6:08pm
Haha, sometimes it is sensory overload! I’m glad you enjoyed it, luv. Thanks for the read and comment!
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23rd Aug 2019 8:05pm
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27th Aug 2019 9:52pm
Hahaha, you'll learn godfather speak eventually. First phrase, "you understand?"
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28th Aug 2019 1:31pm
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