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You fall in love with her
You fall in love with her
It never reaches-
And thank every sacred
Everything for this-
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You fall in love with her
It never reaches-
And thank every sacred
Everything for this-
100%
Published 19th Jul 2019
Author's Note
The beautiful optimism of a project that never reaches completion
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19th Jul 2019 2:18am
19th Jul 2019 2:20am
Thank you. It’s a counter intuitive concept in some ways so I’m glad you get it!
19th Jul 2019 12:12pm
Love has a habit of continuously growing in good soil, otherwise atrophying. Like the way you capture a critical essence.
19th Jul 2019 5:14pm
19th Jul 2019 1:24pm
Gratitude is imperative for growth - solidly captured here. Love truly doesn't reach a height, but expands.
19th Jul 2019 5:16pm
I have another poem about love I'll publish here at some point, that gets at how the mystery and malleable, formless nature of love is so essential to its strength. Thank you.
22nd Jul 2019 5:59am
somewhere in the brevity, you pack in the infinity in the reaching. Thanks for the comp entry, best to you:)
22nd Jul 2019 7:21pm
