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Love💕
( acrostic )
L ove means being homeless in the heart.
O nly your lover will want to touch you,
V indicating he’s crazy about you,
E ven when you feel unworthy -
R eserved for bad hair days.
S ex can simply be hearing him breathe.
L ove means being homeless in the heart.
O nly your lover will want to touch you,
V indicating he’s crazy about you,
E ven when you feel unworthy -
R eserved for bad hair days.
S ex can simply be hearing him breathe.
Published 18th Jul 2019
| Edited 20th Jul 2019
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18th Jul 2019 9:41pm
18th Jul 2019 10:56pm
Thanks, brother T.🐾
If you give me a parameter of only two, I’ll make it stick.🙋🏻♀️🎯
If you give me a parameter of only two, I’ll make it stick.🙋🏻♀️🎯
20th Jul 2019 1:04am
i was told long ago by a poet here
that 2 Trees a Forest makes
and so anything is possible!!
: )
that 2 Trees a Forest makes
and so anything is possible!!
: )
20th Jul 2019 1:08am
19th Jul 2019 1:40am
Well done Jade. You have the core of an intense relationship.
buddhakitty.
buddhakitty.
19th Jul 2019 2:59pm
Thank you so much, buddhakitty, I really appreciate that! And lovely to see you.
19th Jul 2019 2:48am
I think you did a terrific job here in scope and depth. First and final lines I found especially touching.
19th Jul 2019 7:31pm
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19th Jul 2019 7:05pm
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19th Jul 2019 7:26pm
Thank you so very much, Ethan, your visit, reading & words are deeply received.
Anonymous
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19th Jul 2019 10:25pm
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22nd Jul 2019 4:59am
Deep interpretation of Love in highlighting acrostic format dear Jade.. thanks for the entry in comp. Best to you :)
22nd Jul 2019 7:00am
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- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
23rd Jul 2019 10:20am
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23rd Jul 2019 10:27am
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