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Re. Rapture
9th Jul 2019 3:53pm
Mm…alas giving flutter to your soaring bird
Feathery brushing within my tickling delight
Holding back such sweet flow of honey for your desires
Pollinating the nectar of seeping condensation
Immersing your full bloom
When the heat of the moment finally accumulates
Feeling your heartbeats in union with mine
High above our intertwined bodies
We can leave all this behind us
In a blissful defiance
Tender rainfalls we spill
Longings we beautifully merge
Yearns we softly blend
Passions we taste
Soaked pleasure for which we fall
Rapture upon our hearts we stain
Feathery brushing within my tickling delight
Holding back such sweet flow of honey for your desires
Pollinating the nectar of seeping condensation
Immersing your full bloom
When the heat of the moment finally accumulates
Feeling your heartbeats in union with mine
High above our intertwined bodies
We can leave all this behind us
In a blissful defiance
Tender rainfalls we spill
Longings we beautifully merge
Yearns we softly blend
Passions we taste
Soaked pleasure for which we fall
Rapture upon our hearts we stain
Re: Re. Rapture
10th Jul 2019 9:10am
Re: Re. Rapture
9th Jul 2019 4:07pm
Ahh... thank you my handsome moonbeam, a poet after my own heart, and thank you sincerely for reading and commenting. Enjoy the remainder of your day love
Re. Rapture
9th Jul 2019 9:48pm
The picture looks like Frosty the Snowman (of the Christmas song) coming to a melting end, though not in way the song mentions!
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Re: Re. Rapture
10th Jul 2019 4:11am
Mm... well what's deep inside me is not cold by far my handsome King....lol.. you know I could not resist, and you walked right into that.. you may smile my love and thank you for reading and commenting, enjoy your evening and tomorrow
Re. Rapture
9th Jul 2019 10:12pm
To be honest we had trouble with letter color in that graphic. But you corrected that and revealed a beautiful piece, tight Lady
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Re: Re. Rapture
10th Jul 2019 4:13am
Awww...you make me feel so special with such a beautiful comment, and thank you for reading and commenting. Enjoy your Wednesday as well
Re. Rapture
10th Jul 2019 4:07am
Re: Re. Rapture
10th Jul 2019 4:16am
Those words mean more than the heart can measure, thank you my dear poet, and friend for the read and then the comment. Have a pleasant evening and upcoming Wednesday...and once gain "good luck"
Re. Rapture
10th Jul 2019 11:28am
Mmmmm...This invoked a burning inside n I wanna douse it inside of you! :)
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Re: Re. Rapture
10th Jul 2019 11:46pm
I suppose that morning ride was beneficial my love... meow, and thank you for reading and keeping both hands on that steering wheel...enjoy your evening