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forget me knot
forget me knots in spring
he loves, he loves not
I superstitiously chant
the flowers know if it's true love
they bloom for lovers such as us
daisy chains adorn my crown
you are king. I am your queen in love
winter's kiss saw passions fade
the color left my cheeks
when you went away
I held you in my heart's diary
the story of we so lovingly scribed
chanting will he come back to me
or love me not?
when school's session was over
you came and claimed me
sitting among the flowers
little forget me knots foretold
my heart...you hadn't forgotten
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Re. forget me knot
4th Jul 2019 7:02pm
This is such a sweet shortie, I love it, Brenda. You’re such a talented, wonderful poetess❤️😍
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Re: Re. forget me knot
4th Jul 2019 9:13pm
thank you graciously beautiful Liv I'm happy you liked this I wanted to write something light today...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2019 9:01pm
Beautiful...I kinda did a happy dance at the end...love love love your words😘
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4th Jul 2019 9:14pm
aw thank you beautiful Soulz I'm so happy this affected you like that... I deeply appreciate your thoughts today you made me smile...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2019 9:17pm
And you, sweet Brenda made me dance around like a teenager, hugs.
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4th Jul 2019 9:18pm
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2019 9:24pm
I got a few moves...ha ha ha !😘😘😘😘😘
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Re: Re. forget me knot
4th Jul 2019 9:25pm
giggles I'd imagine you do beautiful poetess thank you for making me smile today 🌹❤🌹
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Anonymous
4th Jul 2019 9:33pm
😍
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Re. forget me knot
4th Jul 2019 11:57pm
Re: Re. forget me knot
5th Jul 2019 00:00am
aw thank you I wanted to write something light today...on the note of editing later should I change to he loves me, he loves me not or will that throw the meter off?
I love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
I love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. forget me knot
7th Jul 2019 7:04pm
Just now seeing this & I'm not sure if you did edit or not. It was perfect then & is now. I trust your judgment on flow more than my own, woman!!😂
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Re. forget me knot
5th Jul 2019 1:22pm
I thought by the title this was going to be a bondage poem
I'm glad it was not
Lovely words Brenda
Xx
I'm glad it was not
Lovely words Brenda
Xx
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Re: Re. forget me knot
5th Jul 2019 11:37pm
thank you dearest Poet no not a bondage poem I wanted something light people tire of the darkness so my mind reached for nature where in my youth I am always beautiful...
I deeply appreciate you sexy man...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate you sexy man...
love Brenda ❤
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5th Jul 2019 11:38pm
Re. forget me knot
5th Jul 2019 3:37pm
Re: Re. forget me knot
5th Jul 2019 11:38pm
thank you dearest Tim so much beauty in nature when I need calm my soul goes there...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. forget me knot
Anonymous
6th Jul 2019 3:12am
Awe Crim......outstanding ink......written with a whisper within your ink......beautiful......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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6th Jul 2019 3:19am
Re. forget me knot
Nice! - I surely see a pleasant fragrant adventure for two; amid the flowery glassy eyed sultry blooms!
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8th Jul 2019 00:07am
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8th Jul 2019 00:20am
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12th Jul 2019 7:13pm
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