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In my psyche
Stuck in my psyche.
Sometimes this shit's frightening
to say the least,
a beast bashing my brain from the inside out.
Deranged, delusional
as usual
It's mental mutiny, a mind turning on itself..
Health deteriorating significantly
a sad sight to see
still I'm glad
to just be.
A feeling I try not to forget no matter how upset I may be, no matter how stressed I still feel blessed to be able to
exist at all.
Sometimes this shit's frightening
to say the least,
a beast bashing my brain from the inside out.
Deranged, delusional
as usual
It's mental mutiny, a mind turning on itself..
Health deteriorating significantly
a sad sight to see
still I'm glad
to just be.
A feeling I try not to forget no matter how upset I may be, no matter how stressed I still feel blessed to be able to
exist at all.
Published 29th Jun 2019
| Edited 30th Jun 2019
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29th Jun 2019 1:59am
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29th Jun 2019 6:14am
29th Jun 2019 2:04pm
Gratitude and the expression thereof is your ticket home, Hunter. Don't give up - don't resist the experience; just believe, and know that this too shall pass.
Sounds like an awesome learning experience...and you're right on with the gratitude... pain is there to let us know we're alive...when there is no more pain, we'll be dead.
I noticed line four and wondered... was it perhaps a 'beast bashing my brain' that you intended to say...where you used 'basing'?
Really like this piece...your work is becoming more compact and clear...good job, my dear...hugs, Ely
I noticed line four and wondered... was it perhaps a 'beast bashing my brain' that you intended to say...where you used 'basing'?
Really like this piece...your work is becoming more compact and clear...good job, my dear...hugs, Ely
30th Jun 2019 10:10pm
Very true always appreciate your wisdom Ely thank you 🙏 and yes that was a typo thanks for pointing that out 🙏
So glad you liked!!!
Really really appreciate your kind words and always inspiring feedback can't say thank you enough! 🙏🙏
So glad you liked!!!
Really really appreciate your kind words and always inspiring feedback can't say thank you enough! 🙏🙏
