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Twilight
fading sounds
the tide retreats
a lull in the distance
the shore is empty
shells along the sand
each alone
a few broken
an evening breeze
the temperature drops
the sun sets
night
silence
the tide retreats
a lull in the distance
the shore is empty
shells along the sand
each alone
a few broken
an evening breeze
the temperature drops
the sun sets
night
silence
Published 28th Jun 2019
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28th Jun 2019 10:49pm
28th Jun 2019 11:57pm
29th Jun 2019 7:42pm
29th Jun 2019 2:11pm
I imagine you quietly observing this, Lozzamus. It puts the reader there with you.
29th Jun 2019 7:38pm
Thanks very much, Ahavati. It's all in my mind. I imagine the scene, live it mentally, and then convey it with words.
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
29th Jun 2019 7:31pm
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