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Goodbye sigh
Uttered as a fresh candied sigh
Here a voice rose from on high
Thus caused a near angel decry
So this, her lonely last goodbye.
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Re. Goodbye sigh
22nd Jun 2019 8:00am
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22nd Jun 2019 8:43am
The first thing you thought it meant... was correct...
So very blessed to have your love on my little quatrain...
love always,
Jeff
So very blessed to have your love on my little quatrain...
love always,
Jeff
Re. Goodbye sigh
22nd Jun 2019 8:55am
aw Jeff hugs my dear friend
I'm so very sorry...
painfully beautiful write...
love Brenda ❤
I'm so very sorry...
painfully beautiful write...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
22nd Jun 2019 4:44pm
No need to be sorry....for it is just a poem....thank you, dearest, for the love...
Jeff
Jeff
Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
22nd Jun 2019 4:46pm
Re. Goodbye sigh
22nd Jun 2019 8:50pm
It’s never goodbye... it’s always see you later; so pop that in your pipe, and smoke it !
This, was written like a short and sweet interlude, J... 😎
This, was written like a short and sweet interlude, J... 😎
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Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
23rd Jun 2019 00:03am
Mindtrain loves to quatrain...I do engage the pipe at the end of composition...when it is punch up time...wink
Love your love on my shorty poem...
Jeff
Love your love on my shorty poem...
Jeff
Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
23rd Jun 2019 2:37am
Oh. Life, is too short for “punch up time” as it’s much easier to be gracious, and take the high road because when one door closes, another always opens; true !? 😎
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Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
23rd Jun 2019 3:28am
No, "punch up time"...meaning to take writing and finalize it...to do the final improvement...to sweeten the lines...which in my case is smokey time....it is an old newspaper term...
:)
J
:)
J
Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
23rd Jun 2019 3:36am
Oh... dear; that’s most likely a generational thing for me not being aware of newspaper speech.
In my world, punch up time is related to violence... 🤷🏼♀️😵🤦🏼♀️🤐
Silly me ~ 🤣🤣🤣
In my world, punch up time is related to violence... 🤷🏼♀️😵🤦🏼♀️🤐
Silly me ~ 🤣🤣🤣
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Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
23rd Jun 2019 4:24am
I can see that...it was before my generation as well... American slang...it does kinda sound abrasive without context...I was a history major in college and tend to drop older phrases... however, I put my angry energy into exposing the evil of the world thru the poems...it is better served in that sense...
I really appreciate your attention
Jeff
I really appreciate your attention
Jeff
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2019 9:44pm
Hey Jeff.......so much impact in just a few lines........felt my heart thump.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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23rd Jun 2019 10:33pm
Re. Goodbye sigh
23rd Jun 2019 11:37pm
Many times in my life I have used the power of Doris Day...que sera sera. Poignant ink Jeff.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
24th Jun 2019 1:49am
Whatever will be will be...that is quite a sub reference, my friend,.. thanks so much for the read...
Jeff
Jeff
Re: Re. Goodbye sigh
24th Jun 2019 11:34pm