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SENRYU - LAMENT 001
Clown at dais stands
Flaunting his incipience
Oh heaven help us!
It's gonna be HUGE!
The pile of shit to shovel
RUN! He squats again
Flaunting his incipience
Oh heaven help us!
It's gonna be HUGE!
The pile of shit to shovel
RUN! He squats again
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Re. SENRYU - LAMENT 001
20th Jun 2019 3:33pm
LOL! I am sorry; I realize this is for human rights, and we certainly need more of that in this world; however, I can't help but laugh at the comically astute state with which you've written this. It truly encapsulates the old adage of whether or not to laugh or cry. Or, if it wasn't so true I'd laugh.
Well done, Gahddess.
Well done, Gahddess.
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Re: Re. SENRYU - LAMENT 001
20th Jun 2019 7:10pm
Thank you so much, Ahavati! One cannot help but laugh at such a pitiful individual. The number of broken lives he leaves will come back to haunt him. I am a firm believer in Karma and he's racking up quite a bill...time will come when he'll have to settle his tab.
Re. SENRYU - LAMENT 001
20th Jun 2019 5:33pm
Same as above! Your humour brought me much joy despite the grave reality of the subject. The visual..... giggle!!
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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Re: Re. SENRYU - LAMENT 001
20th Jun 2019 7:13pm
I am glad this piece made you laugh...that for me is all the reward I need. I thought when this monster was sworn in they should have played "Send In The Clowns" rather than "Hail To The Chief." As always I appreciate your kind words and encouragement.
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Anonymous
20th Jun 2019 7:24pm
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its agent orange, isn't it? the infamous apricot hellbeast
its agent orange, isn't it? the infamous apricot hellbeast

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20th Jun 2019 11:36pm
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20th Jun 2019 11:44pm
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20th Jun 2019 11:51pm
Thank you very much Sir Crow...I knew you would appreciate the piece. His stupidity is biblical we can definitely give a modern spin to that OT book.