Lust Blows

Like the way you wove alcohol into the piece, it does play a part sometimes in lust. Tight

Thank you, I'm glad you could appreciate that..

Wow! I love this piece! Bravisima Pandora. My favorite passage "Their words reached out and touched the furthest span as they inked dopamine wishes like braille upon flesh, soul, and mind." Words are powerful drugs. When well written and arranged they can conjure vivid, nearly palpable images...and when those images are deeply sensual the ecstasy, the euphoria felt is orgasmic. In contrast many have discovered the hard way, that words can be weapons of cruel, devastating deception.

I'm so happy to see your comment...
Thank you sweetly for your add too. I need to make my rounds around this place as I'm behind on reading again.

Truly incredible stuff!

I've been there more times than i want to remember (remembering now......)
Nothing else matters 'cept for the moment at hand, the present........NOW
and chemical elixirs enhance and expedite and all is good.........              _right?

Damnit, how many of those times i wished there was more

Anyways, sorry, this is what Your spill found me remembering in my past

Great spill, spilled

Thank you, Tallen for the beautiful compliment. I'm sorry you know it but few here don't. I'm glad you liked it, I rewrote it, but haven't posted it here. I wasn't happy with it but my mind was cluttered too!

Can't wait to catch up on reads now that I'm back!

Deeeeeelighted You are back!!

welcome back, Beautiful Sister

Thank you HF. I'm glad you enjoyed it..

As for those words, I rewrote it because I wasn't pleased with it, my mind wasn't really with it. I need to post it, but that change was already made..thanks for you well invited advice ..I look up to you!!

beautiful Pandora heated lusty passion here
so masterfully written the heat leaps off the page
addicting and intoxicating is your ink...

love you lady...

love Brenda 🌹❤🌹❤

Thank you, Miss crim! I wasn't happy with it but my mind was cluttered too. I rewrote it though & need to change it. I appreciate your support, love!

Can't wait to catch up on reads now that I'm back! Forgive me for being behind. Hugs & love, beautiful lady! ❤

aw this was a beautiful write before I have a confession I like you will go over my poems after I've submitted them and edit as my mind leads...we are poets perfectionism with just the right words here and there chosen to best highlights the poem I get you totally... as far as catching up beautiful one I deeply appreciate your love and light on my pages when you are able...

love you lady...

love Brenda 🌹

Reading for reading between lines....Yeah, like that!

I like it like that! Yeah. You always give me the giggles ☺

damn it beautiful Pandora
it's like you peeked into my future
and wrote out my fate...

phenomenal ink...

I'm overjoyed to see you back
I've missed you and thought about you often...

love you lady...

Brenda  🌹❤🌹

this applies to my current state
and means so much more to me today ❤

It seems I'm just now seeing these latest comments from the 1st.🙄....forgive my crappy correspondence. So much love is sent  your way....you've lightened my mood over here, even if these are old comments.💕
 

When words jump off the page pull you in hold you, what you feel there are no words ( speechless )
Wonderful

Oh goodness, I could hug you! I actually rewrote this but never posted it here, I hated it ....

Pandora I am so glad you did post it, its beautiful you have an amazing talent, send virtual HUGS to you

Haha. I edited it majorly, but haven't replaced it, was what I should have said.😁

Your words exploded across the screen as I read with passion and your choice of words was genius! Phrases like whiskey night coupled with tequila sunrise made me feel the heat of this sexually charged poem where a man should. Fantastic! This shot of lust was just the thing I needed tonight.

XoXoXo
John

I'm just now seeing your kind words and add. Forgive me, my dear friend. I appreciate your undying fandom!