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Another great one. Love this part a lot
"You’re falling asleep
While I lie here awake
You dream peacefully
Unaware of this weight"

This could be relatable to any sort of relationship. Romantic or friendly.

True for sure, girl. Thanks for the read and comment :)

I'm up now but should be sleeping

Nothing worse than lying in bed thinking weird thoughts ...

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Same, and I couldn’t agree more. Thank you, PS, for the read and the understanding comment :)

I really like reading you ....

Aww thanks! That’s so sweet :)

Those intense feeling moments that creep back in the after reflection of clarity ... Lovely write ... Bless and love ... .

Ugh, I know, Alan. Hoping the spill... is just that, a spill. Getting rid of it. Thank you for the read and the comment!

Whatever it is you know it's also beautiful fuel ... Bless and love ... ..

Keep ya head up! I live this a lot trying to not give up on marriage. Keeping silent trying to keep the peace! But doing damage to my sanity, sometimes doesn’t seem worth it.

I know :) thank you, Absence, for the read and kind words!

"But I’m alone in my head"
Ha same this is me always
Great write liv! I dig this👍👏👏

Thank you, thank you, Hunter, for the read and comment! I’m glad it resonated with someone :)

The feeling of being invisible or locked away in your head sure creates one helluva isolation chamber. Years ago this was me. Never let yourself be diminished by another. You're always worth more than that.

For sure, I’m certainly learning my lesson. Thank you, Willow, for the read and sweet words :)

This is one I can feel like it was all yesterday...a shitty place to be indeed!! I love your addition of refrains, they add a unique layer imo!!

Yes, I do like my refrains, adds another dramatic level to it; emphasis. Thank you, Pandora, for the read and kind comment :) and your consistent appreciation of my refrains! ❤️

"You dream peacefully
Unaware of this weight"

Very nice read. I think when it comes down to it, most of us just want to feel like someone understands (or that someone cares enough to try to). Feeling like you're about to sink into the same sea that's being enjoyed by those in calm waters can feel so isolating. You said you wrote this some months ago, so I do hope you are doing better now!

I actually wrote it yesterday, or whenever I put it up :P but it’s about feelings I had months ago, doing much better now, yes! Thank you for the read and the thoughtful comment :)

A powerful existential piece of rhyming ink.
Cheers...Harry

Ah, thank you, Harry. For the read and the comment :)

I am in love with this one.. I feel you on it, and I've been dealing with something similar, so thank you for sharing it; it helped me feel a little less alone tonight.

I’m so happy I could do that for someone. If my poetry only touches one soul, I’ll always be happy it could at least do that!
Thank you so much for reading, commenting and the generous RL adds❤️

We don't know how we missed this gem, extra tight Lady

I am so happy y’all loved it! Thanks for the comment & the love❤️