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Alone
I’m alone
in
the dark
attic
of
my mind
always
alone
with you
save
my buzzing
vibrator
that brings
me
closer
to heavenly
you
as i
wonder
what you’re
doing
knowing
there’s not
much
to do
in
the
desert
as i
tongue
the cool
air
hoping
to reach
your
hungry
mouth.
in
the dark
attic
of
my mind
always
alone
with you
save
my buzzing
vibrator
that brings
me
closer
to heavenly
you
as i
wonder
what you’re
doing
knowing
there’s not
much
to do
in
the
desert
as i
tongue
the cool
air
hoping
to reach
your
hungry
mouth.
Published 14th Jun 2019
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14th Jun 2019 1:02pm
I so know this.......
Imagination in 3D coupled with visions of raw moments had are powerful sexual drivers.
Imagination in 3D coupled with visions of raw moments had are powerful sexual drivers.
14th Jun 2019 1:44pm
Very sensual and sexy flow starzzz... this one definitely heat up the vibe
14th Jun 2019 2:00pm
Its those alone moments when thoughts rise up to meet another that in reality we're far from alone
14th Jun 2019 2:11pm
14th Jun 2019 3:46pm
14th Jun 2019 4:04pm
A confession of a tortured soul who yearns for love, it described the desperation of lonely masturbation perfectly.
Thank you for this courageous write that explores the human psyche. Your exploration into uncharted territory is most appreciated.
PS, I think this would make a great entry for the sensual metaphor comp.
Thank you for this courageous write that explores the human psyche. Your exploration into uncharted territory is most appreciated.
PS, I think this would make a great entry for the sensual metaphor comp.
14th Jun 2019 6:22pm
Perfectly described with vivid imagery of your wants and craving. The tonguing of the air showing how much you want them. Lovely.
14th Jun 2019 6:26pm
17th Jun 2019 2:34am
I feel a connection to this. However I don’t see of feel a sexual metaphor. I do do feel and understand the feeling of loneliness and the desire of someone you can no longer hold. I too feel abandoned and long for the feeling of a lovers kiss
2nd Jul 2019 00:48am
The poem rolls off the tongue without pause and it was an interesting read. It seems simple and filled with detail at the same time somehow.
Peace, love and empathy.
Peace, love and empathy.
