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Gesticulated
I knew it was coming
coming like the second
seconds ticking away
and me
going through
threw it away.
Quietly
shshshshshsh…
a low tide motion
under the veneer of
“ i Love You’s “
body surfing
as far as the wave
would take us;
but at low tide?
I suppose
only one of us
was going;
I’m opposed
to the notion
only one us
was going
through
the motions.
**Sigh. . .
Feeling thrown. . .
for a ride
or
loop
(noose)
coming like the second
seconds ticking away
and me
going through
threw it away.
Quietly
shshshshshsh…
a low tide motion
under the veneer of
“ i Love You’s “
body surfing
as far as the wave
would take us;
but at low tide?
I suppose
only one of us
was going;
I’m opposed
to the notion
only one us
was going
through
the motions.
**Sigh. . .
Feeling thrown. . .
for a ride
or
loop
(noose)
Author's Note
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GLPCTw0eUn0
always me..........
always me..........
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Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 3:41am
tightly hugs you on a very painful write dearest Tallen...
I'm very saddened to read...
love Brenda ❤
I'm very saddened to read...
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 3:58am
thank You for the **hugs**
I am still processing my sad
and will off and on for several weeks
I will attempt to make it more
cryptic
sorry for the sad
appreciate You, Sister
I am still processing my sad
and will off and on for several weeks
I will attempt to make it more
cryptic
sorry for the sad
appreciate You, Sister
Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 9:22am
I love the structure to your poems, the not-quite-certain-orientation of phrases in the grand scheme, the way one begins from another left off.
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Re: Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 3:25pm
appreciate this type of feedback
as i just place the spaces and words
with what Feels right at the time
of writing, editing........typing
thank You for the read and share
as i just place the spaces and words
with what Feels right at the time
of writing, editing........typing
thank You for the read and share
Re. Gesticulated
You have to be one of the most graceful human beings regarding acceptance I have ever known, Tallen. Your gentleness speaks volumes and ensures great peace to follow, as well as poetry.
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Re: Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 3:27pm
O, thank You Beautiful Sister
for the wonderful share
I have,
no doubts that one day i will have a peace
that surpasses all understanding. . .
(i dunno about the great poetry, though *wink*)
for the wonderful share
I have,
no doubts that one day i will have a peace
that surpasses all understanding. . .
(i dunno about the great poetry, though *wink*)
Re: Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 3:28pm
Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 5:47pm
All I can say, Ahavati already said. Just add in the hug to boot though. When they're rough, they're hell so I feel ya!
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Re: Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 5:52pm
This time around
i feel a quiet hell
as the sad is there just not as pronounced for me
I'm accepting all the hugs i can get
i feel a quiet hell
as the sad is there just not as pronounced for me
I'm accepting all the hugs i can get
Re. Gesticulated
Anonymous
1st Jun 2019 5:52pm
#ninjakittyhugs
now I'm certain there's something shifting in the universe
there's just too much sadness everywhere for it to be coincidence...
... everything is topsy turvy
but things tend to move back the way they're supposed to
if we endure the journey
xo
now I'm certain there's something shifting in the universe
there's just too much sadness everywhere for it to be coincidence...
... everything is topsy turvy
but things tend to move back the way they're supposed to
if we endure the journey
xo

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Re: Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 5:58pm
appreciate the hugs
am and will endure............
thank You for sharing with me
Beautiful
(maybe i'll drag out the Tarot cards and see what's up)
am and will endure............
thank You for sharing with me
Beautiful
(maybe i'll drag out the Tarot cards and see what's up)
Re. Gesticulated
1st Jun 2019 9:46pm
Can feel the heart-connection with the YoutubeSong in your words; simple, evocative and a sort of powerful understatement that lifts the whole poem to a higher level.
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Re: Re. Gesticulated
2nd Jun 2019 00:44am
appreciate You sharing this with me, Brother
music and spills often
tie in adding weight to each other
for me,
anyways
music and spills often
tie in adding weight to each other
for me,
anyways
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Re: Re. Gesticulated
3rd Jun 2019 3:31pm