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Carnal Percussion
Salicity rages throughout my
belly and beneath.
All vulnerabilities are weakened
as it channels raw nerves and flesh.
It incessantly
dips, swirls and drifts.
Hardened peaks take shape -
resting atop my chest and ribs:
rising with every
h a m p e r e d
breath.
Love's hollow hearth
beats to a steady percussion
while all of soul and self is left humming
to the tune of sinful desire -
aching with
the all consuming need for him.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 28th May 2019
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Re. Carnal Percussion
Anonymous
28th May 2019 1:32am
Good lawwwwwd girl...nothing like feeling percussion and humming...this has girlie parts tingling lol - thank you! 😊
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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28th May 2019 5:02am
Oooh, my heart gets all happy if you enjoy & add me to your RL!! I admire you & crim so very much, I wish you both knew how so! Hot damn to tingly girlie parts. Hehee.🤩 XO
Thank you, my lovely...a lotus in honor of your tingly one! 🌺
Thank you, my lovely...a lotus in honor of your tingly one! 🌺
Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 1:36am
beautiful Pandora my god this drips sensuality and passion
so beautiful is your sexuality...
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹
so beautiful is your sexuality...
love you lady...
love Brenda 🌹
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28th May 2019 5:06am
Thank you, my sweet Crim. I'm honored as I just mentioned to Taryn above, about you two ladies when I'm showed such kindness!! You know you keep us all afloat regardless....
Love you bunches ❤
Love you bunches ❤
Anonymous
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28th May 2019 1:38am
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Re: Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 5:08am
Thank you HF. I love & value your praise. I'm pleased beyond words you through yourself into this site. You're invaluable!!
Anonymous
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28th May 2019 1:57am
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28th May 2019 5:09am
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29th May 2019 8:30pm
Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 2:41am
filling the heart and mind of pure love are these wonderful words
hot ink stain
hot ink stain
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28th May 2019 5:10am
You always flatter me. Know you're a priceless player here as I send my love & thanks..
Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 4:17am
That steady beat of desire so exquisitely etched.
"Hardened peaks take shape" - lovely image.
"Hardened peaks take shape" - lovely image.
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28th May 2019 5:12am
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28th May 2019 5:58am
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28th May 2019 6:30am
I appreciate it, Magic. You gave me big smiles. Nice meeting a new face too!
Anonymous
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28th May 2019 6:18am
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28th May 2019 6:32am
Thank you graciously, Danny! Most appreciated & even the one you added to your RL the other day. It means a lot. Hugs!
Re. Carnal Percussion
The heartbeats of love. Favourite lines, for the picture of the breasts:
Hardened peaks take shape -
resting atop my chest and ribs:
rising with every
h a m p e r e d
breath.
Oh to be the man who does that to a woman by just being thought about. ( Joining with Taryn's comment, it gets the manly bits as well!)
Poem and pic so beautiful I have added it to my RL.
Hardened peaks take shape -
resting atop my chest and ribs:
rising with every
h a m p e r e d
breath.
Oh to be the man who does that to a woman by just being thought about. ( Joining with Taryn's comment, it gets the manly bits as well!)
Poem and pic so beautiful I have added it to my RL.
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Re: Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 7:21am
I'm squealing with joy.. this comment & your add makes my heart happy! I wasn't sure with the pic, but glad it was a welcome sight. So glad to get your manly bits going too.😁
Anonymous
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28th May 2019 7:10am
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Re: Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 7:24am
Indeed it is ...although lust is such a risky game that's hard to control! Glad you enjoyed it...
Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 7:16am
Brava Pandora! A beautiful illustration of how our bodies dance to the sensual drummer. I love this passage:
”while all of soul and self is left humming " 😍
”while all of soul and self is left humming " 😍
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28th May 2019 7:25am
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28th May 2019 7:54am
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Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 7:56am
What more can be said ... Crescendo slowly built please ... Bless and love ... .
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29th May 2019 8:28pm
Re. Carnal Percussion
Anonymous
28th May 2019 5:05pm
I know this feeling all too well. Couldn't have written it as beautifully. Keeping this one too...
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29th May 2019 8:31pm
Thank you, Willow. You've humbled me here lately... I appreciate it so much!
Re. Carnal Percussion
28th May 2019 10:19pm
Your carnality (and salicity} are presented with true eloquence, Pandora. That "all consuming need" has rarely been so well satisfied.
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29th May 2019 8:32pm
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29th May 2019 9:43pm
I'm truly pleased you thought so. Thanks for your humbling add too, LilDragonFly!
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30th May 2019 4:39am
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Re. Carnal Percussion
13th Jun 2019 1:19am
Drinking coffee
And reading your poetry
What a great mix
God bless you
A very immaculate female writer
And reading your poetry
What a great mix
God bless you
A very immaculate female writer
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13th Jun 2019 9:32pm
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14th Sep 2019 5:06am
In the beginning, your form takes shape metamorphosed by molten desire. This passion unfolds with poetry which rises like a note in a baroque harmony until that finale of lust for him. Truly a one of your best my friend.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. Carnal Percussion
17th Sep 2019 9:32pm
Thank you every kindly for such praise, I'm always in awe when something meets your calibre within my humble crumbs. I'm having to go through your RL to actually catch up with all you've added...wow!