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The Scent And Sound Of The Sea
Sand, water, salt and sky
Blue oceanic laughter
The ice cream van
Bleating seagulls
Clusters of rocks
The solitary garden at the foot of the cliff
Blue oceanic laughter
The ice cream van
Bleating seagulls
Clusters of rocks
The solitary garden at the foot of the cliff
Published 25th May 2019
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26th May 2019 00:14am
This is beautiful imagery, Lozzamus.
I might suggest a space prior to that last line, as it adds a human element - and I do believe a bit of emphasis is warranted there.
I might suggest a space prior to that last line, as it adds a human element - and I do believe a bit of emphasis is warranted there.
26th May 2019 00:16am
26th May 2019 11:18pm
I can smell the sea and hear the screeching gulls way down here in Ozland L.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
27th May 2019 00:04am
