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The Beauty in Her Strength
Her body was a ruin
time's havoc in plain sight
Her heart a vault
victim to ages of pillaging
Her mind a hospital
tending to injured thoughts
But her soul remained fresh
braving the world with a lover's patience
time's havoc in plain sight
Her heart a vault
victim to ages of pillaging
Her mind a hospital
tending to injured thoughts
But her soul remained fresh
braving the world with a lover's patience
Published 25th May 2019
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25th May 2019 3:32pm
25th May 2019 3:41pm
25th May 2019 4:18pm
The body is weak and fallible but it is the mind and soul of a person where the spirit lives. Nice write delanee. David.
25th May 2019 4:27pm
25th May 2019 9:40pm
A wonderfully clear write; much enjoyed. Read it several times to let the hammer blows sink in deep.
25th May 2019 9:54pm
Wow.. I love that my words get described as hammer blows. Thank you!
It was one of those poems I had to dig deep for, so it's nice that this resonates.
Much appreciated.
Delanee.
It was one of those poems I had to dig deep for, so it's nice that this resonates.
Much appreciated.
Delanee.
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- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
25th May 2019 11:53pm
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26th May 2019 6:56am
Oh, HF, you're too kind! I only still consider myself as this 'beginning' poet. Even though I have been writing on and off for most of my life now.
Thank you dearly, these words mean a lot. ❤️
Delanee.
Thank you dearly, these words mean a lot. ❤️
Delanee.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
26th May 2019 12:55pm
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